|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|I'm frozen in time! For real, HH!
This is soooooooooo beautiful!!! So sensual and yet so romantic!
|Reviewed by Crystal-Rain Love
|Every time I think you've outdone yourself, you do something even better!|
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|Perfect! I think you really captured every man's heart in this one. nothing bad there just the man's heart of a perfect valentines gift!
You are special!
Love Tracey xo
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Damn, it's gettin hot in here! I hereby dub you "King of the Romantic Quill" ~Z~|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Warmly romantic and captivating, Ron. Great job. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
|Whew! A beautiful, passionate and sensuous poem, Ron ...|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Grand image; grand write - superlative all the way!!
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
what an enticing write
enjoyed the flavor
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Wonderful write indeed! I like the part about using the tongue as Braille language.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by andrea coltman
|Wonderful, romantic, Valentines poem, Ron...best wishes Andrea|
|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
|Oh Ron, only you could express love, passion and romance in your usual sensuous way.
And he will use his tongue, as a finger
And braille read her all over---> exquisite description. The whole poem vivified with luscious imagery. Penned with grace and oodles of charm Ron ;)
|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent poem, Ron ...|
|Reviewed by Leysa Lowery
|Gives new meaning to "conversation hearts". I'm taking a pen home tonight!|
|Reviewed by Chanti Niven
|Whew what a steamy write. You are right about what men want. Women love the chocs, flowers and soppy cards but men could easily dispense with these things and get onto what really matters to them. Perhaps the accoutrements are merely used as a persuasive tactic. mmmm chocolate really does taste better on skin.
Great poem Handsum. Your lady will be a happy one this Valentine.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Outstanding as usual Handsun You!!
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Ouuu weee! Me thinks ya got a PHD in love makin' and writin' lol! All I can say is, "Bravo, Handsum, bravo!"|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Yes this is an interesting write and the drawing was cute too.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Once again you show such originality Handsum!
The girl who writes to you would be squirming
in her seat in anticipation, as she reads this;-)
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|I would enjoy writing for the man I love :-) Very orginal Valentine's write that brings the passion of the day to the reader. This is fantastic!|
|Reviewed by Bourge
|I wasn't sure what to think of this, to be surprised, or overwhelmed, or what? But my instincts are telling me that whatever- I like it. :)
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Heard of speaking in tounges, but reading? sure sounds like fun fun fun..|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|I don't know, HH. Sounds like a lot of work to me ;-)!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Quite a Grand Love Note you've penned on this page; and I hope your Valentine gets the message!|