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Jealousy :)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Tuesday, February 15, 2005
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Grrrrrrrr. Wish I could write like you do! :-)

Thank you for writing; you inspire me to reach for your level of proficiency.

10 more days *grins*... :-)

"JEALOUSY"
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
I wrote a poem about last night's storm.
I see that you have written one, too.
All I could write about was the storm's dark side.
You painted the storm with lovely hues.
~
And here's the one about being in love.
I see you have written one as well.
Mine was more falling OUT than falling IN.
When I read yours, I swear I hear bells.
~
This is the one about writing poems.
I see that you have written one, too.
I was proud of it, 'til I read your words.
No one writes poems better than you do.
~
I wrote a poem about getting drunk.
I see you have written one also.
Mine makes me sound like I have a problem.
I do...after reading YOURS, how do I follow???
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(C) Copy written, 15 February, 2005, by Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)	2/16/2005

We love your poetry, Karla! Your wonderful! Keep up the good work!




Reviewed by George Jackson	2/16/2005

You are a wonderful poet, and this proves it =0).




Reviewed by Carole Mathys	2/16/2005

Good one, Karla....a very unique write... Hugs, Carole




Reviewed by Phillip William Allen	2/16/2005

All window shades apper to be clean on the outside. It's the inside that really shows you how people are. And to be honest, your blinds sparkle inside and out.




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	2/16/2005

And what do they say about great minds?? This is most definitely your best......lol!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	2/16/2005

A very interesting piece, Karla, and I am jealous - wish I wrote it!




Reviewed by jude forese	2/15/2005

you know that saying, we are our own worst critics ... so only be concerned with improving your poems and moving those who read you ... which you do just fine ...




Reviewed by Ed Matlack	2/15/2005

You have no reason to be jealous of anyone here or anywhere, you have all the ability that God has given you and with that ability you have lit up the lives of many including mine...Ed




Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson	2/15/2005

Your one of a kind Karla, S0 There! Your friend..........Ron




Reviewed by Kate Clifford	2/15/2005

The greastest minds that have shared their words with us have never known they are the greatest. Humble you are.




Reviewed by Sherry Heim	2/15/2005

We all write from our own perspective, Karla. When you speak, do you speak exactly like someone else? Of course you don't...well maybe, you DO have a twin...(laffin') You might listen to another speak and think they have such a great sense of humor or amazing command of language. We all have our shining points and we all have our weaknesses. No one is better than us or less than us. I am going to say this, though, your weakness is not in your writing, it is in your perception of your writing. I like your writing just fine! Take care, Sherry




Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK	2/15/2005

I Never Been Jealous Of Anyone Nor Anything-Why--They No One Could Possibly Own What Little (Priceless) I Have... Karla--Check Your E Mails --Respond Back! TRASK




Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen	2/15/2005

A great write Karla God Bless Michelle!




Reviewed by E T Waldron	2/15/2005

YOu just want us to tell you how great your poetry is and you have nothing to be jealous about and so I just told you;-) You are top self my dear, now own it!;-) etw




Reviewed by Sue Hess	2/15/2005

you have no reason for envy but karla, i understand...sometimes i read someones poem and i want to go remove mine, it suddenly seems different than it did when i posted it. maybe that is what keeps us trying.




Reviewed by Dave Harm	2/15/2005

Jealousy is a trademark I don't carry. I have enough other baggage, though at times, I'm in awe and quite impressed what others write. And you, Karla, I'm always in awe of, to create a work out of jealousy - is talent...




Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)	2/15/2005

Okay and I guess now it becomes the battle of the muses. I enjoy everyone's writes here. Some definetly shine much better than mine. But you know it is so much fun doing some of these. LOL in Virginia.




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	2/15/2005

(((Karla))) Is that your muse striking you?? (SORry! Couldn't resist! LOL Cute picture!) You have no reason to be jealous, Karla; you write the way you do, and many people enjoy what you have to say (most of all ME.)! You write in a variety of styles and moods, and your emotions show perfectly in what you write! Keep on reaching for the stars, you'll always be MY favorite poet! :) (((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D Getting excited about your cruise, hmmmmm???...:)




Reviewed by A PAX	2/15/2005

My goodness Who is making your eyes turn green! Your poetry can stand on its own merit, it is fantastic........ got that!?!?!? FANTASTIC PAX......... a fAN! LOL

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