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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
6/4/2008 |
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| Read Mike's poem which got me into yours. Similar in nature and meaning. God is love, have your heard that expression. I have just learned it this month and it so final and religiously a fact. I do love my God and had love and believe in love wherever it leads, to another world or here on earth. Good write posted here**********. |
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| Reviewed by Mike Chavez |
3/24/2007 |
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Jeff, I got to admit, we are somewhere on the same spectrum as you mentioned, just reversed roles. I feel the depth of your words.
Remain strong and steadfast! |
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| Reviewed by Divinity 11 |
2/2/2006 |
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| wonderful........brought tears to my eyes....is it a curse to love the lost? |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
3/28/2005 |
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| hello Jeff, supuer duper piece you did here. G |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
3/21/2005 |
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Beautiful and so deep, outstanding thoughts here Jeff,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Amira van Kerk |
3/2/2005 |
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If even Gods fall in love and regret it - how should human beings do better?
Excellent write.
Amira |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
2/28/2005 |
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| Deep deep write as always from you!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
2/27/2005 |
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hmmmm..there's MORE here than meets the eye..eh Jeff?
Superb work..love it..saved it!!!
Vesna:) |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/22/2005 |
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| You use effective imagery to emphasize your concepts. Well done, Jeff. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Deborah Richards |
2/20/2005 |
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| IT IS WITHIN TO WRITE TO SHARE, TO GIVE A IMAGE OF ENJOYMENT I LIKED IT |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
2/20/2005 |
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| You are always full of such amazing ideas....A wonderful poem Jeff....a pleasure to read....ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Gabrielle C (Reader) |
2/20/2005 |
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| Wonderful! Love is...after all, the greatest impetus for change. Must be one hell of a mortal to capture the emotions of a god. |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
2/18/2005 |
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| very well written |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/16/2005 |
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after the gods have fallen we can see they are very much like us ...
deep and conceptually outstanding poem ...
(luv that song) |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
2/16/2005 |
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Talken Myth,i.e. There's Only 1 (God)_
Then There's God- As Satan Devil_
Then There's His God AS Deceived Like Followers+ Him Will Do Fall_
As To Only Who God--Only You Can Save Your Own(Soul)Self From Your Own Fears!---Credit For Unique Different Write!
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Jeff Mason |
2/16/2005 |
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| Keep in mind, the gods here are "little 'g' " - as in Greek gods, not "big 'G' " as in the Supreme Being. This is sort of along the lines of a "Tragedy of Greek gods," or something in that fashion. -- Jeff |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/16/2005 |
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Most outstanding poetry Jeff!!
Love Tinks |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/16/2005 |
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Outstanding poem Jeff! the concept is awesome. I do agree however with Judy, it is what we fashion our gods after that fall, never the supreme Creator.
etw |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
2/16/2005 |
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| Fantastic conception and deliverance. |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
2/16/2005 |
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| This is expressed very well and yes even Gods fall but that depends on what we choose to make our God. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
2/16/2005 |
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You are struggling from being "mortal" or "immortal". The Gods has chosen these two words so you can let them eat your brain. The struggle is evident. Good expression.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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