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Friday, February 18, 2005
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One week until my cruise...it's taking too long...ARRGGGHHHH!! LOL (And then the cruise itself will go waaaaay too fast. They'll find me hanging onto the boat, screaming, "NOOOOOOOOO!! I'm not ready for this to end!!") LOL


Ponderous passage
Perpetuated by screams
Abject frustration 

(C) Copy written, 18 February, 2005, by Karla Dorman.



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Reviewed by Carole Mathys 2/19/2005
Have a grand and glorious time, Karla...take your camera..
Hugs, Carole
Reviewed by Chanti Niven 2/19/2005
Dear Karla,
These three lines and but a few words are so effective. Great use of alliteration in the first three words set the tone. Great Haiku!
I hope you have a fabulous Cruise. You will be missed.
Love Chanti
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 2/18/2005
I hope you have a blast Karla
God Bless
Michelle!
P.S Call me beofore you leave, and I'd love your phone number if you don't mind...
Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader) 2/18/2005
I've never been on a cruise. I'm sure it's heaven. You have a great time and tell us all about it!!
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 2/18/2005
I love cruises, and if the sea is rough at night, it's like being rocked to sleep.

All at sea Andy..
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 2/18/2005
You enjoy, girl! I've never been on a cruise. Sounds like quite an adventure. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 2/18/2005
Enjoy yourself Karla...and know that you will be missed!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 2/18/2005
Have a great time, Karla. Cruises are great and they do go too quickly. I hope you are cruising somewhere fun! Every cruise creates memories, so don't forget to take your pen and a notebook, we want all the wonderful details.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 2/18/2005
Enjoy every second of that fabulous cruise - because they do go much too fast - and don't waste too much time sleeping on it. And when they are over, I've felt like hanging on to the ship, too!
Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J 2/18/2005
Have a great time Karla. Waiting often makes the trip that much more enjoyable.

Love from India - Joel -
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 2/18/2005
A very strange one with a graphic picture but there is a whole lot that I like about this.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 2/18/2005
Love the play of words :-)
Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy 2/18/2005
Karla, have fun and make a lifetime of memories in the few short days.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 2/18/2005
Karla you are right, all the wait then it's over in a flash!
But there is nothing like being at sea, you will love it! You
will have all the memories to treasure forever. Make sure you're
prepared for the dinner picture they take at your table. You'll
have that to treasure too, among your other pics.

etw
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 2/18/2005
I would pay to see you hanging on to that boat...Ed
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 2/18/2005
(((Karla)))

I hope you have fun on your cruise; you deserve it! It's getting close; I can sense your excitement! Good for you!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Wonderful write! Well done! BRAVA!
Reviewed by Sue Hess 2/18/2005
i hope it is everything you hope for. i have always wanted to go on one but i travel with my sister and she says i'm not her ideal date for a cruise LOL
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