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Saltwater
by George M Jackson

Saturday, February 19, 2005
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There is a lump in my throat today


I cannot account for, nor understand


From whence it came, only that it


Lingers there, a taste like diluted


Saltwater that seems to block much


More than my ability to explain its


Source, it seeks to somehow release me,


Blurring my vision in an effort to escape


 


This inarticulate lack of self-expression


By way of bitter teardrops that flow


Unseen, face cupped in trembling hands


As I give a desperate prayer that says much


More than the sum of its words, complex


In its simplicity, powerful in its sincerity,


Three short words my only salvation now


That I have learned how to say them and


 


Have started to listen once that prayer has


Passed my lips…


 


God help me.


 


END


 


“Saltwater” 


 

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Reviewed by Danielle Mundy 2/19/2005
wow, this is a very emotional write..I hate to say that I enoyed it when it was so sad, but I did :)
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 2/19/2005
Powerful emotion well-expressed. This one is captivating.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by jude forese 2/19/2005
to help myself ...

another three short words that lead to salvation ...

excellent poem, George ...
Reviewed by Larry Rochelle 2/19/2005
Sometimes the words alone have power.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 2/19/2005
Those are three extremely powerful words, George.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 2/19/2005
beautiful write, george, and know you are always in my prayers! don't ever give up hope; have courage! i love you too! :)

(((HUGS))) and much love (and prayers), your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Reviewed by Sylvia Carroll 2/19/2005
Look up....look up. Always look up. This is sooooo good. I love you.
Mom
Reviewed by Sue Hess 2/19/2005
this is great. my prayers for help were finally answered back when i stopped praying please give me and asked please help me
Reviewed by Dave Harm 2/19/2005
You got me smiling! Very good... nothing more powerful then "I"... it comes from the soul...
Reviewed by E T Waldron 2/19/2005
George I'm so happy to see you know the key is in the listening once the words have been said. Sometimes only one word is enough, for the spirit has already gone before you with your needs. You are stronger than you realize to be able to write like this.It is the prompting of the Holy Spirit you are following, so you are in good hands;-)
Love, Eileen
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 2/19/2005
These are the only words that matter sometimes... powerful, George, as always... funny thing is, these moments, for me anyway, tend to flee away in as mysterious a manner as they come - so guess prayer is every bit as powerful as we might hope for! Trust that your experience is somewhat the same... grace for the moment is what keeps the wheels moving forward. TY and bless you, Kate xx
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 2/19/2005
Yes this one does reach out and get you. Learning the words of any prayer is really very good.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 2/19/2005
Okay now you got me......in tears with this one!!

Thanks for this great offering George!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 2/19/2005

Deep emotions poemized under the sounds of a heart that pumps wisdom.

"Saltwater brings a profound message through its lines of poetic
excellence.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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