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|Reviewed by John Mayer
|Very REAL poetry. My friend is arising from her quicksand now.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Captivating in its strong emotive appeal and meaning. I know this feeling, Anne. You have done a masterful job of sharing its power. Thank you. Love, peace and strength to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|intense write; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(
i am claustrophobic too.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
JAYS this one is claustrophobic--and i understand this feeling all too well.
Powerfully, vividly, painfully expressed--
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|How claustrophobic, Anne.
I hate it when this happens.
A strong write though.
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|I find what the others have said especially Steven to be what I would say.|
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|This is incredible.
It would be nice to hope this is just some poetic burp that has nothing to do with your circumstances.
If it's all too real, please go get the Blue Collar Comedy Tour DVD now.
|Reviewed by Chanti Niven
This poem touched me deeply. I once wrote a poem called 'Stillness erupts' and although it was very different, the cry was the same. On the surface calm but beneath those still waters, fire breathing dragons lay in wait. It sounds like a lot of loving care is needed. If this is where you find yourself right now, I can only pray that you find relief...that those loved ones around you show their love of you and take the pressure from those poor weary shoulders. Take heart Anne, your voice is heard and even if we, your fellow poets, can't physically do anything to help you we are here to support you. Please reach out if you need care. You are a special woman.
With love Chanti
|Reviewed by Danielle Mundy
|heartbreaking write, Anne...I would hope that the family you're encircling might be able to help you...all you have to do is ask ;)|