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  lost in space
by Sara Coslett
Monday, February 21, 2005
Rated "PG" by the Author.

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walking along a loamy bank
eroded from storm after storm
a white rock catches her eye
as it juts out from the rich dark soil
on inspection and with great perplexity
she tugs until the soil gives way
from deep within the earth
and with a sudden snap
a skeletal hand escapes
shocked, and out of breath,
she drops it to the ground
a call is made, authorities investigate
thoroughly searching until nothing else is found
the hand is placed into a box
thrown onto a cluttered shelf
uncovered after all those years
its rest remains unfound

copyright 2005 sara coslett

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Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Eerily Good!
Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
WOW, you got me. How many times have I tugged at what I thought was a pretty shell, or rock at the beach, I can now imagine what I'd have felt if one of them turned out to be a human hand. You did well with this little mystery.
Reviewed by jude forese
the mystery in this is very intriguing ... hopefully it will be investgated hands on ;)

nicely penned!
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Now, it's getting on about bedtime on the east coast. Why you gots to come along, Sar Coslett, and give me something creepy to think about? You needs a spankin'!
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
This would indeed make a good mystery/murder story.
Reviewed by A PAX
Sounds like a great intro for a murder mystery..........
have you got something in the words Sara ?

pax A
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Brrr! Chillingly effective, Sara. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Ah, yes, and she grew into an old woman, her and the hand. There were strange and vicious rumors about her and that hand. I didn't believe them though. LOL
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
I love this, reminds me of and old Peter Lori? film, where he imagines this hand moving across the floor etc, that and thing..
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
This is bloody spooky Sara!!

Geeeez it's dark here and sitting alone here grrrrrr!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Sara this is so haunting! You made a great impact with the way you wrote it! Superb! ...

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