|Reviewed by Michael Kersting
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
This poem flows from a fountain of deep thoughts to
the lake of sublimity. "Done My Time" is an inspiring
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz
|Girl...this is so beautifully compact and yet pregnant with meaning.
You are really, really Goooood!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Wise message. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Damaa --
|Very nice, Mizzlady!|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A marvelous poem, Mizzlady - and that is a wonderful quote.|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Depends on where you did your time, if it worked for you, then your future will change for the better...if your life is your time, then I think you seem to be doing just fine...if this poem is any example...Ed|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|our souls are imprisoned only as long as we allow them to be ...
(ever read Watt's, "the Wisdom of In-Security"?)
deep and inspired poem ...
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Girl, this is good. It's sooooo good. I get so tired of people saying, Oooh, don't talk to me if you got drama. Well, sugars if you don't have drama, you've flat-lined. You're dead. Life is drama. It's how you handle it that makes the difference. Simplicity is in the mind. Master it! Great write!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Excellent Z~ we all come to our time when we understand the things that have brought us to it.I think life is lived on levels of understanding, and how long it takes us to reach each level is up to how much we put in to learning about ourselves. Love, Eileen|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Yes this one has a lot of depth and insight and brings out some truths as well.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Indepth and thoughtful write about our life here on this old planet. I believe that we do take ourselves a bit too seriously for the most part. It has taken me quite a few years to understand that and the fact that people can actually get along if they pnly put their minds to it and forgive themselves for the thoughts that they have which hinder that "getting-along." You really took this poem to another level. Good.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Gotta let them ole shackles go go go, and move on on on, and have fun fun fun..
Great determined write..
|Reviewed by Dave Harm
|Intense. When we're ready, our time is done... a new journey begun...|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Most powerful piece Zenith!!
Thanks for sharing!!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
A strong, affirming write--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
That pic is kewl!