|Reviewed by Kenny Moon
|a breath of fresh air, anita!|
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Uh ooh, I must be united to quite a few.
This is an excellent poem.
I'm gunna be more careful with whom I share my halitosis with from now on..
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|A breath, a kiss,
Beautiful expression of a wondrous concept.
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|You are such a talent....gorgeous work Anita......you shine......ty, Dani (yep a real dag :p|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Beautiful and I too believe the spirit is
contained in ones breath.
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|This is simply exquisite, Anita. And if one has ever been at someone's side when they die, the quote would certainly strike a chord...|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Breath should be shared by true soulmates - a marvelous poem, Anita (and quote, of course).|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Fantastic - in both concept and execution - and the picture enhances the sentiments beautifully, the twin flames breathing shared oxygen. I am sure there is truth in the supposition: God "breathes" his Spirit into us and I love the thought of this intimacy carrying through all that we are into our kiss: sublime! Last stanza pure perfection! Says so much about the joys of the kiss as much as anything else! LOL Kate xx|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Gorgeous, stunningly gorgeous ... breathtaking write!!
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Mystical treat here. And something to think about. Maybe if you don't enjoy kissing someone, it's a sign, no matter how many other things you like about them. Hmmm. ;-) Enchanting poem, Anita.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh this is a beauty Anita!!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Breathtaking and so beautifully penned--stunning!!
(((HUGS))), love and continued prayers, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by Janet Parker
|Beautiful poem and interesting story.|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Reviewed by Jennifer Butler
|That is so very beautiful, Lady A. Such grace and flow in the lines, and the sentiment well expressed. I do love the quote above accompanying this.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Gorgeous, sublime, just what I was thinking when I wrote mine;-)
We are like-minded this morning;-)Beautiful poem, Lady A!
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|This is very beautiful and we in the Indian culture have a saying about the breath of an animal.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|This is a damned beautifully written and touching poem, Lada A. When your brerath is shared by a TRUE soulmate, there is just nothing in this world can compare. Good.|