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To Lisa and Jayden Underwood's Killer
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Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Wednesday, February 23, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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We, in North Texas, are understandably angry and in sorrow. My prayers are with Lisa and Jayden's family. *tears* :-(
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Go back to the pit where you crawled out of
And take the evil with you when you go
Everything was fine until you showed up
We are not used to all of this sorrow
Go back to your hole, you sorry bastard
And don't let the door hit you in the ass
I hope you suffer for the pain you caused
Here's a ticket to hell, it's booked first class
Three lives have been erased, because of you
Our tears are rivaling the storms outside
How can God forgive you, because I can't
Not with all of this anger deep inside
Go back to the pit where you crawled out of
And take the evil with you when you go
Everything was fine until you showed up
We are not used to all of this sorrow
(C) Copy written, 23 February, 2005, by Karla Dorman.
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| Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader) |
2/28/2005 |
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| Very sad thing to happen. Prayers are definitly with the family. |
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| Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga |
2/25/2005 |
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Dear Karla,
I don't know this horror story, but then, it doesn't seem different, as it is now sadly rife worldwide... The mind aches with painful thoughts, of how "someone" can inflict so much cruelty upon others.
Deep write Karla.
warm Hugs
Elga your friend in Sunny SA |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
2/23/2005 |
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| powerful write, Karla... |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
2/23/2005 |
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Wow! Powerful write, when will the madness end?
God Bless
Michelle! |
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| Reviewed by George Jackson |
2/23/2005 |
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| A painful, yet beautifully expressed poem, that surely conveys what some many of us feel at these senseless, brutal acts. Well done, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
2/23/2005 |
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| I agree with you and it is too bad we here at the den can't get this guy and do a lot of poetic justice with him. But we are supposed to be the nice ones like hell. Hey drag him on down here to Virginia there is a lot of land over where I used to live and nobody will find his sorry ass. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/23/2005 |
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Brava M'Lady!!
Powerful write Karla!!
Enjoy your trip Sis!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
2/23/2005 |
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This is such a terrible horrid thing. First there was Meagan Holden, and now Lisa and Jayden and unborn child. Who's next? Me? You? Our neighbors?
We live in such a turmoil anymore that none of us can be safe no matter where we are.
I agree Karla..but then I agree with everyone else as well.
Lisa |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/23/2005 |
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I hear you Karla, you're saying what we all feel. Sadly Jerry is right too, this sorry society is a result of us not being involved enough in who we let teach in our schools and who we vote for.
Bon Voyage, put it all behind you and enjoy your trip, you earned it!
Love Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
2/23/2005 |
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| But you see, Karla, that is just the point. He will not go back to the pit where he crawled out of. He is us. He is the result of the sanctimonious judges and the slimy lawyers and the sympathetic juries of the bankrupt justice system that is in every state and the federal government these days. Lisa Underwood's killer is a product of the time and we desperately need to take back America. |
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| Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader) |
2/23/2005 |
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| Powerful write, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
2/23/2005 |
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(((Karla)))
Your anger is justified; I feel the exact same way! He deserves to suffer for the evil thing he did; he WILL answer to God, and he can't back out! All we can hope is that this sort of thing never happens again! Powerful, anger-driven write; well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears, tears, tears < |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
2/23/2005 |
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| so sad, i understand your anger, it touches everyone |
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