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When She Closes Her Eyes
by D. DeMartini

Wednesday, February 23, 2005
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In the right light, you can see the burnt passion of dawn hiding in her hair
She likes to look into the sun
So that when she closes her eyes
Ginger illuminations cloud over the dark.
Making it all just a little easier to bear.

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/30/2006
Succinctly powerful! I love it. Love and peace,

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 2/27/2005
NIce! I like the words, "Ginger illuminations."
Reviewed by Jane Rodway 2/27/2005
I agree with Robert, the economy of words in this shows the skill of getting a point across with a few well-chosen words. Great work.
Reviewed by jude forese 2/26/2005
outstanding poetic economics ...
Reviewed by A PAX 2/24/2005
Makes me think of a spice cabinet........
of all the right combinations :)
Reviewed by Sandy Knauer 2/24/2005
I love this! Much said in few words. Great job.
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 2/23/2005
Short but to the point and yes it is easier to bear.
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