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When She Closes Her Eyes by D. DeMartini Wednesday, February 23, 2005 Not rated by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan
In the right light, you can see the burnt passion of dawn hiding in her hair She likes to look into the sun So that when she closes her eyes Ginger illuminations cloud over the dark. Making it all just a little easier to bear.

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray	10/30/2006

Succinctly powerful! I love it. Love and peace, Regis




Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson	2/27/2005

NIce! I like the words, "Ginger illuminations."




Reviewed by Jane Rodway	2/27/2005

I agree with Robert, the economy of words in this shows the skill of getting a point across with a few well-chosen words. Great work.




Reviewed by jude forese	2/26/2005

outstanding poetic economics ...




Reviewed by A PAX	2/24/2005

Makes me think of a spice cabinet........ of all the right combinations :)




Reviewed by Sandy Knauer	2/24/2005

I love this! Much said in few words. Great job.




Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)	2/23/2005

Short but to the point and yes it is easier to bear.