|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Love cannot be stopped. Powerfully and poetically stated, Sara. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by D May (Reader)
|Lovely write Sara.|
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
soft and forward motion
|Reviewed by jude forese
|never let that fire burn out ...|
|Reviewed by Koty Lapid
|Such a beautiful image and lovely poem...|
|Reviewed by Shaw Inchrory
|In the burnt aroma of our yesterdays
That, would thereon a sunset sea, set sail,
Heed so the westward winds of our endeavours
That we may too, those helping winds prevail.
|Reviewed by A PAX
I can relate!
|Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
|Ah that hormonal wildfire...even water does not quench it.
But as Oscar Wilde said "the only way to deal with temptation is to yield to it"
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|beautiful, Sara, both the picture and the poem. So expressive and full of longing.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Well expressed Sara!!
Take care Girl!!
Say Hi to the "invisible" visible...lol!!
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Very well done.|
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Just don't get burnt. Just be a bright spark..|
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Hubba, hubba. Loved the passion of this. ;-)|
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Soft n subtle. Nice|
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|This is positively locomotive, Sara... heady, in some marvelous way as it rolls along, picking up steam. The poetry gives it beauty, the style and form makes reading it a treat. I love the ending. It's where I hoped it would go, but spoke it in a newer, more clever way. Good stuff! katy xox.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Superb! Point well made, burn well expressed;-)
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
This is so powerfully emotive and so well written--follow the currents to love. :) BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|I can relate, Sara. It is such a sweet hurt that it almost feels like what we want Heaven to feel like, but there is also that sweet/sour pang of a devilish streak that makes it all the more delicious. Maybe?|