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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
9/25/2009 |
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| If I wrote my own script, I would be arrested within 48 hours! Enjoyed. |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Weaver |
8/22/2009 |
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Regis,
Only you mon ami can turn words into sheer gold. Tout simplement manifique!!!!!!
Nicole |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
7/16/2009 |
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Hi Regis, Are we the audience of our own script? It feels like it, to me. When all the dreaming, wishing, hoping and praying is over, we end up on the stage anyway, watching others watching us. Very thought-provoking and deep. Only you.... thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
1/5/2008 |
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Regis,
A witty play on the metaphor. So much truth in what you say. The ending has a sad feel, which is something I see often in your deep writes; a longing. Thank you for sharing this work:)
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang |
4/7/2005 |
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Beautiful graphic photo Regis!
I have missed your works most of all!
Super flow of words,
you have what it takes!
Becca Lang (changed my last name to my Mom's) |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Du'Gas |
3/24/2005 |
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| Regis I love it! |
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| Reviewed by Tova Gabrielle |
3/21/2005 |
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| neutral.... |
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| Reviewed by Patrick McCormick |
3/17/2005 |
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Very Nice Regis
Pat |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/16/2005 |
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Regis,
Thought provoking...so beautifully penned--excellent!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :( |
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| Reviewed by Debra Barone |
3/14/2005 |
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| I love this...it captures my own thoughts and God, how I wish we could write our script sometimes; yet all we can do is hope and pray |
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| Reviewed by M. B. |
3/10/2005 |
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Regis, this is so true though:
If that were so
Scripts would conflict
Too many directors
Too many actors
Too many angles in the plot
The production would be a mess
The audience (you and me)
At best confused
At worst crazy
You seem to always manage to realistically capture the best and the worst of life so gracefully within your words. That's raw talent plated with 24k gold skill.
I look forward to reading your poetry.
(((Hugs)))
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| Reviewed by Pier Tyler |
3/4/2005 |
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Great thoughts; glad you decided to share them. Dream, Hope, Wish, Pray, find myself doing it every day. I know exactly what script I'd write...
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| Reviewed by Dana Matthews (Reader) |
3/4/2005 |
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A Sippur of life and longing...
Your thoughts touch us all Regis.
T C - D a n a |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
3/2/2005 |
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Very nice and well written Regis. You do have the flair for the dramatic, and that is what capitvates us an audience. May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))) ... Barbie
"If I have to...Then I may as well be." |
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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz |
3/2/2005 |
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Ahhh...Regis...what a lovely, lovely piece!
The graphic complements it perfectly, too. |
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| Reviewed by Henry Lefevre |
3/2/2005 |
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May our worthy prayers be answered.
May the unworthy prayers die before being born.
Hank |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
3/2/2005 |
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Dear Regis...I can relate this my friend...I cried after reading this write of yours....the ending made me shed tears...this is very deep and powerful my friend....well, you are the master of the verse my friend....your words touched the heart of your reader and thats the reason why I rate you very high as a poet....You are the role model my friend....cheers...love n luck...let me end by quoting your own write..."No wonder people
Dream
Hope
Wish
Pray
That’s what I am doing
So you can be with me'"
EXCELLENT!!!!!
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
3/1/2005 |
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Regis,
Exquisite write my friend ... definitively refined - outstanding!!
Best regards,
Robert |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Gibson |
3/1/2005 |
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Regis,
I've missed some excellent work by not visiting your A/D site and reading more often. This is just another exquisite example of the thought provoking master pieces you write. Excellent my friend.
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi |
3/1/2005 |
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| It's true. Neither our (socially) productive nor our imaginative powers are absolute. Yet, we are not meant to resignate. You caught this reality very well in your poem. It carries a nice and thoughtful melancholy. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
3/1/2005 |
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An Awesome write indeed... Regis
as all yours truly are
William .....Peace |
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| Reviewed by Sandra Corona |
2/28/2005 |
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Regis, you write such romantic verses ... everyone swoons, perfection achieved :)! Fabulous artwork too! Bravo! Hope you get your wishes :)!
:)Sandy |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
2/28/2005 |
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May it be so Regis.
Blessings,
Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
2/28/2005 |
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c'est terrifique!! well done, mon ami! bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
2/28/2005 |
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This is awesome, my friend...
You write with beauty and style!
Your friend, ~Linda |
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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
2/28/2005 |
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Stream-of-consciousness poems are my favorite as they reveal what is really in the persons mind, in the exact way it flows out.
I agree with you, it is our desire to mold the world to fit our internal scripts that definitely creates confusion. Actually I think to be more precise: it creates unmet expectations. And boy oh boy, watch out for those unmet expectations when they come barreling at you at nearly the speed of light. But when it works, it is the best thing in the whole world. It is peace.
~ Sara |
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| Reviewed by Franz Kessler |
2/28/2005 |
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| Very romantic and light-hearted contemplation of life. Perhaps we all should dream/hope/wish/pray a bit more. Franz |
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| Reviewed by Safi Abdi |
2/28/2005 |
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This flowed so naturally, Regis. Well done!
Safi |
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| Reviewed by Danielle Mundy |
2/27/2005 |
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| I liked the style you used for this one; it was almost like reading one of those stream-of-conscious papers. I do agree that a scripted life would seem to easier at the moment, but scripts only work in movies and soap operas- well movies anyway LOL. Just remember that all things happen for a reason and everything happens as it should :) *HUGS* and take care. Danielle |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
2/27/2005 |
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If that were so
I would write mine
And you would be with me
..the above says it all..indeed you have a way with words Regis..I gather you have a way with love as well..
saved this one..:)
Vesna:) |
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| Reviewed by Kenny Moon |
2/27/2005 |
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| i like the line variation and the sentiments expressed - living by love is the best philosophy! k |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
2/27/2005 |
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Very romantic and quite nice.
Bravo! |
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
2/27/2005 |
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| One sweet pen Regis |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
2/27/2005 |
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This was so true and lovely Regis, beautiful expression in this outstanding poem,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Handsum Hart |
2/26/2005 |
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In the end, we do write our life's story, nice work
Happy writing Regis
Joy and sunshine |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/26/2005 |
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| a well scripted sense of longing ... much enjoyed ... |
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| Reviewed by john zimmerman |
2/26/2005 |
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hauntingly beautiful,
and deeply resonant
a poem it is
and a good one!
john + |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
2/26/2005 |
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Oh I like this theme lol
I relate and have written on it myself.
I guess we are souls given to speculation.......
its always good I believe to have aspirations beyond acceptance........
we hold the world in our yearnings.........
and find magic in our wishes!
oh now I am meloncholy! lol
pax A |
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| Reviewed by June Thompson |
2/26/2005 |
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| much enjoyed. I liked the photo very much as well. life is a movie, a game, so many things it has been called but most importantly they say it is what you make of it. |
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| Reviewed by Constance Gotsch |
2/26/2005 |
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How true
Connie |
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| Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J |
2/26/2005 |
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Beautifully longing, Regis. Love could do a lot and only one of them is to make us dream and dream forever:) :)
Love from India - Joel - |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
2/26/2005 |
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| Some seem to read the wrong script.. |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
2/26/2005 |
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| I love this write, Regis. I've often thought the same thing about folks who say we can just name it and claim it. If that were so easy, then I'd have a lot better lovelife and more toys. LOL |
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
2/26/2005 |
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May I suggest a gentle irony, Regis? In writing this, and it's wonderful, indeed, you have scripted part of your life... the lovely thing is, you allowed us to see it.
I like the way you tied it together at the end. It's a bit of a quiet rant, yet that is all part of it, isn't it? Poetic is what I'd call it. (smile) katy xox. |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
2/26/2005 |
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Regis, It may not be poetry in the form of the educated. But it heart and soul poetry for all that's read it.
The scripts in our lives are not always ours to write..but we can keep freelancing until we get it right.
Beautiful work and magical thoughts Regis.
Lisa |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
2/26/2005 |
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| Caught up into the disordered world that is at once chaotic, unfathomable, outside of our control - and yet, at the same time, has a perfect rhythm, pattern, order and natural "rightness" about it, even within the seeming randomness... if you are in the midst of it with the other person/soul that lends stability and reason to your "reason to be". That personal counterbalance survives - even thrives, I think, in the midst of all things and is more sharply noticed when life is "a mess". Sounds like the poetry that is life. Your words are perfect sanity and perfect poetry to me, Regis, as always. TY and bless you (both!!) Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by ~ Chanti |
2/26/2005 |
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Dear Regis,
As always you get wonderful feedback from your fellow poets here at the den and deservedly. I did notice that some people referred to this poem as 'prose' while others call it poetry. I know that the purist's view would be that anything that doesn't conform to a strict metrical structure or that doesn't rhyme is not poetry but I don't hold to this view. I think that poetry encompasses many styles and forms, including free verse which I believe this is. You are very gifted Regis and your poetry always inspires me.
You pose an interesting question. Do we write our own scripts? I think that this might hold true to a point but there are circumstances that are simply out of our control. I found it interesting that you use this analogy and then seem to refute it. Where old Bill Shakespeare compared us to actors in a play, you see 'us' as the audience. Is this because you feel powerless at this time? I pray your script plays out and that your 'mirajolie' will be with you as you desire.
Love Chanti |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/26/2005 |
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Done to perfection Regis!!
Sighhhhhhhh....yes sighhhhhhhhhhh!!
Love Tinka..............sweets....lol!! |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
2/25/2005 |
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| "If we could write our own scripts..." I'm trying to imagine the incredible kaos that would ensue in this scenario and all I see are millions of puppets whose lines are hopelessly tangled, and puppeteers fighting for space on the stage! May you be united with the object of your dreams soon, Regis... |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
2/25/2005 |
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| If life had a script, I kinda think it would be boring...though it would be nice to know a bit of the future...? Ed |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
2/25/2005 |
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| Nicely done, Regis! |
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| Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) |
2/25/2005 |
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Excellent! Very Methodical and Great points here and you always keep that Romance, Love and Peace about you! Beautiful You!! Beautiful Poem!! Picture I love it! This poem will help me dream too, of you and her!!!
Thanks my friend.
XXXXX OOOO
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
2/25/2005 |
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If this is not poetry, then it must be poetic thoughts at least. Never let go of your dreams, Regis. Nothing is impossible if you believe it will happen and desire it to happen.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
2/25/2005 |
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Sounds insane!...but it's wonderful! Who wants to be sane?... Well not me anyways. Heeeheee!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/25/2005 |
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hmmmmm sounds like love to me, and beautiful poetry!
Hope your wishes materialize!;-)
love,
eileen |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
2/25/2005 |
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| Sounds great to me.... |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Close Mills |
2/25/2005 |
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| This is a lovely write...my friend has such a beautiful heart! Michelle |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
2/25/2005 |
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| Nice thoughts... lol. Reads like poetry to me. |
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| Reviewed by Eddie Thompson |
2/25/2005 |
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i think your destiny is to find peace...i truly do...great poem.
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| Reviewed by Huda Orfali |
2/25/2005 |
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If I were to write my own script!
Well, I'll let God write it for me now bcus am not inspired to write :(
Beautiful poem, Regis, thanks for sharing
Love and peace |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
2/25/2005 |
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| This is a splendid write, Regis.... |
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| Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader) |
2/25/2005 |
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| I love this. Poetry it is! |
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| Reviewed by John Bidwell |
2/25/2005 |
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Ah, I was hoping to find a Regis offering.
Always a gem to study, and put in different lights to see all it can do.
Wonderful.
I'll let God write this script any day. He is getting it right now. LOL.
John |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
2/25/2005 |
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It sounds a lot like poetry to me Regis and definately gives the reader pause to thought as well as a glimpse of the love you have for your "someone". I like this one a lot.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader) |
2/25/2005 |
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| Beautiful write. :) |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
2/25/2005 |
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| I like this is a really good thing to write our own script but then maybe we would miss some key characters if we did. So we must be content with a biography. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
2/25/2005 |
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| It's romantic poetry to me. |
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| Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell |
2/25/2005 |
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| I call it wishful thinking in the form of lovely prose..... |
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| Reviewed by Ann Marquette |
2/25/2005 |
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Interesting thoughts and profound actually. Think about it though...most of us do write our own scripts, that is why the world is a mess and we keep dreaming, hoping, wishing, and praying...
because we don't let God take control and guide us to a more beautiful path than we can dream of for ourselves.
I really like this piece Reg...
ann |
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| Reviewed by Sarah Tagert |
2/25/2005 |
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| loved reading this, truly delightful! |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
2/25/2005 |
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Most Excellently Done,i.e. Your Best Yet Done Right On_
Most Important Is To Never Stop Dreaming--For With Out Your Dreams You,I (Nobody) All Will Have NO THING To Look Forward Too_
In Midst Of (It All) Your Dreams--- You Make SACRIFICES As I Have You Can Too--For Sure I Know Your Dreams Will Come True...
Your True Friend,TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Aberjhani |
2/25/2005 |
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| A moving song of love, longing, and gentle rage. Beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Larson |
2/25/2005 |
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| Excellent write Regis...Enjoyed. |
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| Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader) |
2/25/2005 |
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Wow, I think you have a winner of a pitch here! Very romantic, and so very true, if only life were like the movies.
Monette |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
2/25/2005 |
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| Oh, Mr. Auffray, I would call it prose and I would call it good. And my momma told me to never lie. |
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