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|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
This is one of your very best poems. Your passion speaks between the lines.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|moving and well penned ... sometimes the choice we make is made for us ...|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|This one reads like a song lyrics. It can be made into a song. Lovwly write.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|I agree with Jerry and you do have a way with words.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|You are very good at playing with your words in these poems. i absolutely love how you fine-tuned this one. It was pleasurable all the way through but when, at the end, you wrote the line that explained it all, it was just fantastic. I love it. You will have you day in the sun sooner than most, I'm betting.|