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Voice from A Distance
by Tinka Boukes
Saturday, February 26, 2005
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“Voice From A Distance”

 

She hear a gloomy voice cry

From a distance yet so near

Could this be a dream or is this for real

As dawn wakes in morning light


Thud

Cry stopped

With a silent hush

From above the morning sky

Down came a falling star

Down came a thousand birds

And cover up heavens above


Like a dream

What can this mean?

Did another spirit die

Silenced by a fist

And the pain inside

Does this heart

Ache out of hate or out of fear

Or because

She can still hear…something

Hear the wild birds song?

And did she hear her own cry

Rise from wet grass

As she rises from her knees

 

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Reviewed by richard poor 2/28/2005
chase your dreams, not men.... you put this one across in a unique way!!!
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) 2/28/2005
Wow! Powerful Poem Evcellent!
Thank You
Love Tracey xo
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 2/27/2005
Tinka,

Love the photo - chilling write; a superior poetic piece ... stunning my friend!!

Best wishes,

Robert
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 2/27/2005
Oh Tinka, this was so lovely and deep, just beautiful poetry flows from your pen, outstanding,

Reindeer
Reviewed by George Jackson 2/27/2005
This is beautiful.
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 2/26/2005
Nice work Tinka.
Now stay out of the wet grass.

Peace
Reviewed by jude forese 2/26/2005
some dreams have the power to reveal the life within us so that we can see who we really are ...

great poem, Tinka ...
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 2/26/2005
Yes this is a most haunting write. Extremely well done.
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 2/26/2005
A most haunting write...choices need to be made! Take care Tinka...
Reviewed by john zimmerman 2/26/2005
tinks, very enigmatic and evocative
well crafted and well done

john+
Reviewed by E T Waldron 2/26/2005
This is totally gorgeous Tinks, and I love the pic. Thanks for sharing!

love,
eileen
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 2/26/2005
Yes this is different and I am proud to say that the judge convicted the man of abusing his wife. Two years probabiton and two years of anger management or else. She has a protective order but went to work as he won't support kids. But he has another day in court. He will not face a real man but there are those of us out there waiting and willing to help.
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 2/26/2005
Different Done Good!

TRASK
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 2/26/2005
good one
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 2/26/2005
Been so long since i have seen anything green, I forgot how beautiful it was, everything here is still white and supposed to get even more so the beginning of the week...nice music and a scary dreamy thing, but the picture lends itself to make this a nicer write than maybe you meant...Ed
Reviewed by Nordette Adams 2/26/2005
Boy, everybody's dreaming spooky lately or so it seems from their writings. I'm starting to think Robert the Shaman is on to something. Hmmmmm is all I can say here. You've written a chill. Love the pic.
Reviewed by Sandy Knauer 2/26/2005
oh my goodness - made chills run up my spine. Sad as the message is, it's delivered in perfection.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 2/26/2005
awww Tinks, this is painful reading.



PS. Make sure there ain't zulus in that grass, less Michael Caine's there to protect you..Just been watching the film. ZULU. Blimey, no wonder we lost the cricket...
Reviewed by Dave Harm 2/26/2005
And did she hear her own cry
Rise from wet grass
As she rises from her knees

Powerful ending... It takes courage and strength, to get back up and try again. To never stay down, for rewards which have not yet been seen...
Reviewed by George Carroll 2/26/2005
Brutality unleashed on a woman by a man is inforgivable.
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 2/26/2005
Maybe for once she heard her own voice. And the power, and the strength of it so overwhelmed her that she thought her heart stopped beating. And the knowledge that she had a voice of her own. A voice that she owned, that she could control, that it made the tears rise and her knees were all green, for she was envious of her own voice, its strength and her power over self, the power that is her. ~ Sara
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 2/26/2005
haunting yet beautiful write, tinks; thanks for sharing! very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :)

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