Under Abridged (poem) by Brian K Pellerino on AuthorsDen

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Under Abridged by Brian K Pellerino Sunday, February 27, 2005 Rated "PG13" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan
In the weariness of misadventure, I'm given to pause. I find it liberating to shackle myself to an idea much like starting something else can bring closure. I find the alacrity of my membership charming. For a few moments at least. Then, as with things and me, I'm fragmented. Scattered across a myriad of charges and pursuits. Fruition be damned, it's the journey right? I know I beat an unfamiliar path through these woods. I don't recognize the foliage. Yet, I find the exercise familiar. I hear your words and I grind them into meaning and apply them to their places in the puzzle and I still don't see the picture. I'm starting to feel like I don't get the joke. Maybe I am the joke. Copyright: Brian Pellerino 2005

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Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU	2/28/2005

A symbolistical ontologic and teleological inner discussion through the lines of "Under Abridged" stimulates philosophical thoughts and delivers a striking souls�message. I have learned a meaningful lesson through this mind�s feeding reading, "Under Abridged". Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU




Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)	2/28/2005

A well executed write and you know I have to say I wonder about the joke question raised here. These thoughts have certainly crossed my mind.




Reviewed by Danielle Mundy	2/27/2005

excellent write, Brian, but I'd like to tell you that starting a journey with a clear view of the "picture" wouldn't really be worth the adventure. Going down the path less traveled often produces a more worth-while outcome than just going with the flow. :) chin-up, all things turn out as they're meant to despite what we might do along the road.




Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya	2/27/2005

In the weariness of misadventure, I'm given to pause. I find it liberating to shackle myself to an idea much like starting something else can bring closure. Very good write Brian....love n luck...BHUWAN!!