|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Very cool write Linda! I've written some poems
about him at least one hmmmm...remember I told
you to listen to that sound swhoooooossssshhhh
that's information going over the top of my head.
lol Anyways it was a sad day when James Dean died.
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|James Dean's death affected me deeply as it did most teens of the 50s. I thought he was the coolest of the cool, and I still have a
fan shot somewhere amongst my belongings.
The comparison of his reckless, hurried attitude towards life...with the easy-going Jimmy Dean of country western fame is really a perfect contrast.
You are a talented lady, Ms Gayton.
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Descripted with flair and poetic ambience ... stunning work!!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|How could one refuse such an exquisite invitation, Linda? Thank you. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|I applaud the way you describe the boomerang hesitation of the lover.....he sounds like a trip! lol sorry,
This is very very good!~
let the air out of his tires
oh I loved that line
its too late to die young!
got me laughing
life does that to us, no?
|Reviewed by D May (Reader)
|This is a great. Loved the visuals here.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Vivid imagery you painted here Linda!!
Thanks for sharing!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A truly interesting piece, Linda, and I must admit that I've often had the itch to travel down old Route 66 many times myself.|
|Reviewed by Chanti Niven
|Whoah Linda, another 'hit' here.
How do you do it? I read these words with something approaching envy. It builds to such a climax and then you drop in those words '...oh go on then' and POW! Great stuff!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Route 66, I guess is a motorway.. Slooow down reeelax. Great message.
Women to seem to possess perception, that we totally lack..
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Well if they are destined to live in the fast lane the safety of your arms is sad. A poignant write here and so often repeated on the highways. But perhaps Barbara had a good answer too.|
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|If he had a dream like and it was me telling him, I would have said "well go on then but, don't have the police come back here telling you had died wrapped around a stupid tree somewhere, cause I told you not to go, but you insisted. Bye bye." May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))) ... Barbie
"If I have to...Then I may as well be."