|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|hot dream...i haven't had one of those in a long time...sounds wonderfully arousing|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|She was the hottest just before the wave broke and you awoke?
|Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick
|Dreams are so pure, like love, hard to forget.|
|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
A goddess for sure to inspire such a beauty of a write. Delightfully delectable imagery Jude, well penned.
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Very passionate write! Some deams are great to experience :-)|
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|What an outstanding dream/write here Robert...excellent in its depiction.
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|Nothing beats a wonderful dream.
A splendid write.
Peace and sunshine
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Beautiful and excellent Jude, this was outstanding,
|Reviewed by Dave Harm
|Wonderful write... create by the power of the sea, in you and around you... well done...|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Least the ones in dreams don't nag nag nag you, to the point of having to go and pretend to work on car..
Or wonder why you have not read their femanimal minds...
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|As James Brown would say: "Too funky in here":-)
Enjoyed it o' flame-nibbling sea-roving dream-traveling poet.
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|A beautiful, dreamy write!!|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Nice dream, Robert, made me want to crawl right into our dreamspace and create an awesome partner for her for my own delicious imaginings. Beautiful poetry! "I could still taste her flames" What a great line.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Wonderful write and very imaginative.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Ok, Robert... but can she type? cross one eye? (not as easy as it sounds) or sing on key? These are also important attributes for that priceless connection.
I'm teasing... (so unlike me!) If this is what you dream, it's a wonder you're awake, by choice, anyway. I know, I know... I've taken a really remarkably vivid, beautifully expressed vision and gotten silly. It's a funny day... a typical "grinny" katy-day. Sigh... Forgive my babbling... I do love the poem. (smile) katy xox.
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Well, this is not hard to figure out. Let's see. It's the Angel of Truth come to give you great knowledge of the mysteries of life. Those Angels of Truth, they're always wet like that with perky breasts. Halle Berry was the Angel of Truth emerging from the sea to meet Pierce Brosnan when she debuted as a Bond girl. I'm right. Go ahead. Tell me I'm right! I know my Angels of Truth, baby. You're so deeply penetrating on this one, Jude, and hot too. ;-)|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|A beauty Robert!!
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|"I could still taste her flames"
Outstanding poetry! The verse is
so unique and great.
|Reviewed by Janet Parker
|Whooo, whooo! Hot-cha-cha. Seriously Jude, Beautiful write. (5th stanza first line last two words...transposed?)|
|Reviewed by George Jackson
|Great write, Robert.|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|lol still laughing at Ed......
but seriously this is lovely :)
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Amazing how powerful dreams can truly be.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Yes Robert the power of the subconscious is often kind to us. Great way to express this dream, perfect balance.
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Ed you'e worse than Homer Simpson and Pinchey!!
Wow Rob, what a dream, sure beats the heck outa the one I had last night, ONYA mate.
|Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
|Beautiful poem, Jude ... I loved the imagery ...|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|...(g) is for "goddess"? "galleon"?... Hmmm... in my book it would have to be "gallop" in this instance, as it puts into my mind the thought of riding white horses bareback!! (Probably because Chanti's mention of "chimeric" reminds me of my "Sphinx"?!) Not surprised this isn't part of your dream sequence, Jude, as what could either precede or follow it?! I love it's freedom and independence - maverick and RAcey!!!!! WTG, TY Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I have dreams like this of late, Jude. I hate waking up from them. But the nice thing is, often, when I go back to sleep, the dream continues. Thank you for sharing this delightful offering. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
|I loved the images in this poem - and then I read Ed's comment and...it's not the same. LOL! Great poem! ;) Silver|
|Reviewed by ~ Chanti
|lol at Ed! He is such a boy!
Jude this flows so well. You are so prolific you cannot have spent much time on this and yet nobody reading it would know. It is a superb piece of writing. It could be viewed as chimerical but in my mind dreams have a way of touching reality. Even if your dream never materialise, it leaves a footprint within your heart. I hope you have more and are inspired to write more in this romantic vein.
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Balances the intellectual and spiritual dimensions with equally stimulating thoughts in the social-sexual plane...Strictly as interpretation, I intuit that a gorgeous babe will be rocking your world soon(lol)...|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Everytime I see a Maine Lobster dripping with butter, I feel the same way...ed|