|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz
|LOL at Jerry's joke...but not at your blues.
I know them too well, myself, Tinka dear.
Hope the sun is on the rise for you.
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
A very powerful, emotive write, one that took a lot of intestinal fortitude to pen ... don't forget though, "It's always darkest before the dawn," my friend!!
Best to you,
|Reviewed by George Jackson
|Diana May said it better than I could. An honest, from the gut write. I believe thats where the best poems start. Wonderful, Tinka.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a sad but very passionate write! feel better soon ...|
|Reviewed by D May (Reader)
|We all have days like this--but Tinka you have proven time and again that your spunky spirit cuts through the fog and we will find you sitting in the sunshine. You have touched my heart.
Hugs to you dear lady.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
A powerful tear-jerker write. Take care.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o(
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|you are making a bull bear tear
cheer up kid
change your thoughts
let them fly around you head
like "TINKA BELL"
smile again, stay off that pier.
William .... Peace & Love
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|One can't be a ball of joy all the time.
But you'll bounce back soon.
|Reviewed by Cynth'ya email@example.com
|Something good came from your challenging day Tinka. . . and I just read it.
May your tears refresh and renew you,
cynth'ya lewis reed
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|What the hell, we all get the blues,
I think it has something to do with paying our dues,
So get up off your ass and make yourself feel better,
Just don't in anyway read a paper that prints the news...ed
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Oh so sad Tinka, Hoping your spirits lift soon, very well expressed!
|Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
|I agree, I hope these blues pass by you soon. Just so you don't feel alone, we all (or most of us anyway) have those black days. I've had moments (weeks, years, etc) when I totally was in sync with the lyrics "I see a red door and I want to paint it black" Sing it Mick! Great way to release some of these emotions is to write about them. We love you. ;) Silver|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|A write filled with the blues...hope they pass soon, Tinks
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|A melancholy write. I hope it passes soon.|
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|Hey Tinka, what are we doing?
I have been on such a sorry for myself roll lately.
I'm getting a grip "Now." (My latest poem).
I am lucky I can be hurting, "Blessed are those who morn, for they shall be comforted."
He knows what He's talking about.
Hey, I love that beautiful lady in the picture.
Oh, that's you.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Truly hope the Heartache is soon replaced with Laughter, Sunshine, and a lovely view of your deep blue ocean, Tinky.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Cheer up Tinks, you know what they say, when you chewing on life gristle, don't crumble, give a whisle, and things will always turn out for the best, so always look on the bright side of life always look on the light side of life, if life seems jolly rotten, there's someting you've forgotten, and that's to smile dance and sing, soooo always look on the bright side of life, de dum de dum de bum de dum de dum de dum, always look on the light side of life.............Sing along you know the tune.....|
|Reviewed by ~ Chanti
You're such a deeply sensitive soul. I think you need a hug (((((((Tinka))))))) I hope you feel better soon. This poem expresses your feelings so well.
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|You're the smart one, you go on what the aborigines call "a walk-about" when you're feeling down. Must be something in the air, as we AD girls are moody today, sis...Have it out with the Big Guy, He can take it. Love ya...|
|Reviewed by Walter Jones
|Silver left on the dawn, heart ache is never very long, soul searches for the happy song, life is thr key for what you long, always the grass is greener here in the hearts of those you hold dear. A bit of salt air and you will be walking home. To be so atuned with self is truly a great gift.. have a good day kid.. Walt|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Join the club Tinks;-)Hope you find a "pick me up" and
when you do tell me what it is;-) LOL! love you! Great
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|I like Jerry's solution. Read some good jokes. Find a copies "Rush Hour 1 and 2" a truly silly movie, "Rat Race."
Love ya, Tinks. You've shared your emotions well here.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|A police officer, though scheduled for all-night duty at the station, was relieved of duty early and arrived home four hours ahead of schedule, at 2 AM.
Not wanting to wake his wife, he undressed in the dark, crept into the bedroom and started to climb into bed. She sleepily sat up and said, "Mike, dearest, would you go down to the all-night drug store on the next block and get me some aspirin? I've got a splitting headache."
"Certainly, honey," he said, and feeling his way across the room, he got dressed and walked over to the drug store.
As he arrived, the pharmacist looked up in surprise, "Say," said the druggist, "aren't you Officer Fenwick of the 8th District?"
"Yes, I am," said the officer.
"Well, then, what in the world are you doing in the Fire Chief's uniform?"
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|i am sorry you are having a bad day today. i hope you feel better (and happier) soon! you are in my prayers, tinks!
know i love and care for you; many people do!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :(
((((((((((MORE HUGS))))))))))) (Just because...)