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Retribution
by Zenith Elliott

Sunday, March 06, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Being judgmental, may reap irreversible consequences...


 


Careless opinions


cast about


weakened walls


spewing doubts...


Puzzle shards


glittered doom


piece together


forming ruin...


Twisted options


form caravans


spiral towards


a known nemesis...


Destruction is eminent


by twisted options


when careless opinions


sprout from wicked lips...


Cry not, as perfection


grimly reaps...


mass repercussions


upon it's nemesis's sleep...


 


 


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Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 7/30/2005

I imagine that in a meeting between Minerva, Erato, Phoebus
and Euterpe to discuss how to search for a Poet on Earth, they
- UNISON - would just say, after reading "Retribution", "EUREKA!"

"Retribution" is sample of what is Poetry's compliance.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi 3/16/2005
Excellent as always.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/12/2005
Truthful and sound wisdom offered through your verses here. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) 3/8/2005
Careless opinons the most deadly hurtful weapon there is. Perfect
Thank You
Tracey
Reviewed by Nickolaus Pacione 3/8/2005
A harsh poem here and well executed. I am impressed by this one -- glad you enjoyed "Desolated Oblivian." You should turn this one into a full length short story.
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 3/8/2005
wise words
well crafted!!!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/7/2005
Right on the mark, Z~! perfect! I believe in Karma!;-)

love,
eileen
Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii) 3/7/2005
I'm awed by your rhythum in this excellent piece. Bravo!!!!!!Mikii
Reviewed by E. Richardson 3/7/2005
wow...this is really good...exceptional flow and structure...and ya gotta love those wicked lips...splendid job, Mizz
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 3/7/2005
Poetically powerful.

Wicked lips are a dangerous weapon in my book.

Take care
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 3/7/2005
Mizzlady,

Exceptionally versed, imaged, and poetically written - wonderful work!!

Best wishes,

Robert
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 3/7/2005
Destruction is eminent
by twisted options
when careless opinions
sprout from wicked lips...

Most profound, Mizzlady.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 3/7/2005
So very true. Excellently expressed.

Be quick to listen, slow to reply..
Reviewed by jude forese 3/6/2005
when careless opinions
sprout from wicked lips ..

powerful poetry ...
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 3/6/2005
Spoken and written extremely well!
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 3/6/2005
Mizzlady,

One reaps what one sews. Words spoken in haste come up to bite you in the rear. :) I learned that a loooooooooooooong time ago.

Thank you for the wisdom in this powerful, thought provoking piece--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

You will be missed. :(
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 3/6/2005
Read with sorrow your note regards leaving us for a time...but hope you will stop by and say hello, but if you cannot just think of us all and smile as you do, as we will quite frequently for you...Take care & find Peace Mz. ~Z~...Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/6/2005
Powerful posting Zenith!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Nordette Adams 3/6/2005
You remain a wise and profound woman, Z. :-) ~~Nordette
Reviewed by George Carroll 3/6/2005
How true your poem is. Great message to be heeded.
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