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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
3/17/2005 |
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OMG! This is glorious..indeed the love of the Twin Flame..what else? right?
saved this one as well..ty Kate..{{hugs}}
Vesna :) |
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| Reviewed by ~ Chanti |
3/11/2005 |
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I've missed so much Kate. Please forgive me. Life has been so hectic and I've only checked the board when I've had a moment and reviewed poetry I found there. Now that I'm tracking you, I will be able to tell when you post new material. Why didn't I do this long ago? Another superb poem that literally made me draw breath with awe.
I have said this to you before but if there was ever a poet that I wish I could emulate, it would be you. Take that as a compliment.
Love and admiration
Chanti |
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| Reviewed by Jane Rodway |
3/8/2005 |
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| I like the simplicity in this, the images are strong. Good work!! |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
3/8/2005 |
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Kate,
You've learned to burn the candle at both ends - impressive; a visual treat for the eyes ... superb!!
Best to you,
Robert |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
3/8/2005 |
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Because a candle burns
I am not in the dark, alone
You are with me, but you are not
the molten wax that singes my finger
with its burning liquid skin
Kate...clap clap clap...now, you are becoming very very creative my friend....you are on the way of greatness...mark my word....five years from now on everybody will know your name in the literary field cause now you are writing with much passion and vigor....you have everything with you to be a successful poet...so all the best for yur future....am cinfirmed that it will be a bright one...You are the pride of the AD...its always a joy to read your work and learn from you....love n luck....BHUWAN!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
3/8/2005 |
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such heat in such a short write!!!
felt the flames here............intense
enjoyed you |
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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz |
3/7/2005 |
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Oh Oh Oh....this is so 'visually' lovely that I took several
breaths while reading, and could almost see and smell the smoke of that extinguished flame.
I love your work, Kate! |
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| Reviewed by Janet Parker |
3/7/2005 |
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| Kate, this is beautiful, mezmerizing and romantic. The images are outstanding. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
3/7/2005 |
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| That's quite a flame - and this is quite a poem. |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
3/7/2005 |
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This is awesome, Kate. I was drawn into your verses. Some people just burn into our soul, don't they?
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
3/7/2005 |
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| Musta had a great mothers day. Fun fun fun... |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/6/2005 |
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| Kate, this is one outstanding poem ... i became one with its images ... just great ... |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
3/6/2005 |
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| Wonderful write. |
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| Reviewed by George Jackson |
3/6/2005 |
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| Excellent write, Kate. |
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
3/6/2005 |
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| ...proving once again, or maybe for the first time, that suggestive words and blatant sex (Shhhh), is not poetic erotica... THIS is where it's at, my sweetly overheated, flammable femme, Kate. YOU 'light up my life' and tons of others' as well... visions, written with grace. Sigh... lovely! katy xox |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
3/6/2005 |
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| Superb a metaphorical beauty |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/6/2005 |
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lovely enchanting poem Kate, I love the metaphor and the brilliance of the flame. Superb work!
love,
eileen |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
3/6/2005 |
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| I think the object of our desire may be even closer in our longing, as you have emoted here Kate. As I was reading this smokey little gem, I was listening to "Fever" by Ray Charles and Natalie Cole...funny, life's little coincidences! Don't you just love the smell of snuffed candles,heavy with musk? Love the analogy... |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/6/2005 |
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The flame of love, of passion and of need can burn wildly or flicker and fade out if the wind blows too high. Nice write and lovely thoughts Kate.
May your poetic flame never be extinguished.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/6/2005 |
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Kate,
Your words illuminate the forgotten territories of the soul--JAYS this is gorgeous! Beautiful illustrative piece--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :) |
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