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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
11/15/2006 |
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"Dry (enter pre-interlude"
Emotionally charged and filled with great imagery.
Thank you for sharing,
From the Heart of an Aritist Quiet Stom
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/8/2005 |
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| exceptional imagery and flow ... |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
3/8/2005 |
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Powerful deep shit
a profund write
William ......Peace & Love |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
3/8/2005 |
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There's Price $$$ To Pay For Everything,i.e. (Shit)zip-pa-de-do-di_
In Blink Of Your Eye You Stand Before (God) Naked (In Your Shit) Stripped Of Your $$$ Worldly Goods...
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
3/8/2005 |
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You sure know how to send a story 'round the bend to soul flow, girl.
;-) Nordette |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
3/8/2005 |
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Mitzi,
Superlative emotive write - exceptionally penned ... loved this!!
Best to you,
Robert |
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| Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J |
3/8/2005 |
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A powerful write, emotions spilling with words of wisdom.
Love from India - Joel - |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
3/8/2005 |
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| Profound write, Mizi |
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| Reviewed by Zenith Elliott |
3/8/2005 |
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| Gurl, I like how you told it...like it is, was and will be...sheer power and strength in yur words! |
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| Reviewed by Lynn Barry |
3/8/2005 |
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| THIS ROCKS! I love the part about smelling the roses but not forgetting the shit that grew them...that is brilliant! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
3/8/2005 |
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| Even when you are dealing with the most bone-crushing of subjects, your writes are never "Dry" and there is an eternal truth and an eternal spring that bubbles forth in spite of the epitomised hardship and pain: like poppies strew the killing fields. You wring every last drop of emotion from your subjects, Mitzi, and your flavour is fullsome. Like Anna Marie, I especially liked the line: "Prayers rise like dresses under wind And dirt roads". Duality is certainly in everything, like you say: even the most ugly of life's circumstances and situations. TY for this well-crafted piece. LOL Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
3/7/2005 |
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Sad that so many waste time on being pathetic.
Great forthright poem.
Love the way you hit, without some even realising that you have given them a knock out blow.. |
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| Reviewed by Aberjhani |
3/7/2005 |
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| A true arrow of a poem shot straight from the testimony of a wise and sincere spirit. And a wonderful read on top of that. |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Gibson |
3/7/2005 |
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Mitzi
Honest and up front and very powerful. I love your style and the frank straight forward way you write!
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz |
3/7/2005 |
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This is something else, Ms 'Z'...just as YOU are!
"Prayers rise like dresses in the wind."
Great image! |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
3/7/2005 |
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| She does indeed pack a punch with her writing and the painting is excellent. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/7/2005 |
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excellent, just solid writing, mitzi! well done! love the pic, too!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Handsum Hart |
3/7/2005 |
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A strong write, that packs a powerful punch.
Take care |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/7/2005 |
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Profound write Mitzi!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/7/2005 |
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brutally frank and honest write..
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
3/7/2005 |
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in the new day….we may be able to smell
the roses
but we’ll never forget the shit that growed em
Truly profound, Mitzi. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/7/2005 |
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Always shockingly honest and good!Well done Mitzi!
eileen |
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