|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You may "tread lightly" but there is no denying the power behind your words, Mitzi. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Nicole Lasher
|Deep and well written poem. I respect its sentiment, even though I'm more of a stomper. ;-)|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Another great work from you Mitzi...you have such a knack for writing in so many genres
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Girl, you are quickly becoming one of my favorites--BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|That's how to roll, lady.
my wails (as you say) are light
not for you Behold the Underlying Truth
if your soul protests, should I sense you’re worried?
Now this is so true! Loved the whole poem, Mitzi.
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Wonderful write as ever from you...BHUWAN!!!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Keep that inner peace Mitzi and write that outer truth! Well done, as always!
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Great piece Mitzi|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Not much into the Bible Mitz, but I like your twist of the wrist.
|Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
|Now THIS is how it's done.|
|Reviewed by Jane Rodway
|This has great rhythm, I can see it as performance art, it just slides into each line with a beat, and the intensity of the words make it very powerful. Good job!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Awesome piece Mitzi!!
|Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu
|My soul sang because I know peace,
Not peace that emanate from the outside,
but from within.
Thank you for this write. I am blessed by it.
|Reviewed by George Jackson
|Such a gifted poet you are, Mitzi. Truly enjoyed this.|
|Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J
|Powerful and thought provoking. A lot of wisdom and sense in what you are saying too.
Love from India - Joel -
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Awesome write Mitzi...|
|Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
|Awesome write! I loved those references to the bible to illustrate your meaning. Incredible! ;) Silver|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Excellent write here Mitzi and then what to do when one runs out of cheeks. Reminds me of what did he die for?|
|Reviewed by D May (Reader)
|Excellent writing. This piece overflows with your unique talent.|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|"They are a delusion, their works are nothing
their images are empty wind"
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|my wails (as you say) break chains
I truly believe that they do, Mitzi; and may they continue to do so.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|You have a waty of "treading lightly" as you punch us in the nose, Mitzi. The Ghandi-like passiveness of this poem is juxtaposed with seething rage and a feeling of helplessness of things done wrong in the past. So, I read this "i tread lightly" in a much different light than will a lot of readers, I imagine. I concur with your seething rage. I know that it can, and is, beneficial to the well-being of your soul. Very good stuff.|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
So i tread light
Cause that’s how my spirit
Told me to roll………….
There has never been any words ever spoken more powerful than those.
Great work Mitzi!