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Dreamer Child (a response)
by Chanti Niven

Wednesday, March 09, 2005
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I received this in response to my 'Dreamer Child' and was so touched by it I wanted to share it here. This is written by a very special person. I will forward all responses to the poet who penned it for me.



 

DREAMER CHILD

The armor and the sword, oh Lord
They’ll have no use today
A multitude of souls so brave
Come to aid you on your way

The loving glow from a million hearts
Is here to light the way
Of those who see through thin disguise
And have bent a knee to pray

Leagues you’ve run through waving grass
have woven strong the tie
Stout heart strings of  the hopeful stars
They shall not pass you by

Be unafraid oh dreamer child
Though on life’s rough hewn glassy ledge
Sweet blessings borne of actions past
Gently lift you now from fragile jagged edge
©2005
 
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Reviewed by Barbara Terry 3/13/2005
Chanti, this is so beautiful and so true. As a "dreamer child" myself, I have over the years seen my life come to this day, when my dreams have finally taken on ripe fruit. I still dream, but now for the man I wish I could call mine. May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))), Barbie

"if I have to...Then I may as well be."
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 3/13/2005
Both are seamlessly woven and are like a two-part song, a duet of hope and encouragement. Honesty and gentleness are irresistible and those whose words and actions in life remind others of the lives of angels reap an angel's response! :)) 'Tis but the law of reciprocation and whatever is given is amply returned. May you truly be blessed one-hundred fold for your gaciousness and kindness. You light up the Den. Bless you, Kate xx
Reviewed by William Bonilla 3/12/2005
Excellent write Chanti
Well Penned

William ....Peace & Love
Reviewed by Paul Berube 3/11/2005
This was absolutely perfect. Your responder has summed up life in a nutshell in four perfect verses. This is so smoothe and very well penned. May you both always be protected from that jagged edge.
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 3/10/2005
faith and beauty
just what are displayed
you and the respones
we have wonderful people here don't we!!!

enjoyed both pieces
take care
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader) 3/10/2005
As lovely as you!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/10/2005
Most wonderful response Chanti!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 3/10/2005
Fantastic write....BHUWAN!!!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 3/10/2005
A beautiful response to your poem, Chanti - especially love the last stanza.
Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson 3/9/2005
Beautiful poem indeed...excellent
Reviewed by jude forese 3/9/2005
a beautiful and insightful poem ... see what you inspire ;)
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 3/9/2005
A very poetic piece for sure.

Best wishes
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 3/9/2005
Absolutely beautiful write...thank you for sharing with us.
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen 3/9/2005
One strong pen.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 3/9/2005
Chanti,

Enchanting, beautiful piece--please thank the author for penning this work, and thank YOU for sharing their talent!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 3/9/2005
Such a multitude of feelings throughout this poem. The path for goodness has been trod and the grasses of turmoil have been flattened for this dreamer child to run her life without fear. Very good.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 3/9/2005
Wondwefull Chanti, see you bring out the best.

Felix
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/9/2005
What an incredible tribute. Your beautiful soul touches so many, dearest Chanti. I don't know what to say. All the love in my soul to you.

Regis
Reviewed by Paul Williams 3/9/2005
Fantastic response to your poem Chanti, a very fitting and touching write.

paul;-]
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