|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Oh my goodness! Mitzi. This one got me going, conjuring up all those memories of human stain spilled.
|Reviewed by Sandy Knauer
|I agree with what Felix said - "this has such an erotic yet sweet innnocense to it as well that the reader is not sure to feel so happy for her" I'm amazed at how tastefully this was done. Sandy|
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Ah Mitzi, your poems are so creative, raw and lusty! You sure know how to push everyone's buttons! lol Well done!|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|This is, "tell it like it is great"
truly could not stop once I started
William ......Peace & love
|Reviewed by Kenny Moon
|Phew! what a hot poem. I can all but see the steam rising. And like the rhythm and the insistence and the repetitions and to borrow a phrase, the complete evaporation to the core... love is just a four letter word. Very physical poem, red-blooded!|
|Reviewed by A PAX
God..........the is GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Your touch of reality is always extremely insightful for the reader.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|uniquely riveting erotica!|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Nobody writes with more real, raw emotion--stunning write!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Another "in your face" no nonsense powerful poem, Mitzi. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Say no more every one else did already!!
Love Tinka :}
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Always argue who has to sleep in the wet stain.
Joking apart, this is such a unique write.
So glad to be new to this den.
Had to laugh out loud at the last line..
|Reviewed by Li Smith
|Like Judy Lloyd says, "You sure know how to light up a page!" I'm sure baby luvs you lots of jelly tots! Best Wishes, li|
|Reviewed by George Jackson
|My thinking may be skewered, but I found this to be a haunting, somehow and beautiful.|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Funny Thing Bout Human Stains,No Matter What Color You Are THEY NEVER (Sin)WASH OFF----Until Death Inevitable Smell Stench While You're Burnen In Holy Hell_
Credit For Off Wall Romantic Write...
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|somebody come and help me here!!!....zowwwwwwwwwwie,you can't be writing like this while I'm here all alone. at least wait til I tell you he's home Mitzi;-)never read erotica like this before, like coke it's the real thang!
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|Mercy me! Daaaayaaam! Now this is pure erotica! Splendid work!|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Mitzi this has such an erotic yet sweet innnocense to it as well that the reader is not sure to feel so happy for her (the subject) or a sense of wanting to reach out and protect her from loves entanglements. Glad at the end he is a life mate.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|You have some nasty, rough and tumble phrases and words sprinkled all over the place here, but then, damn, that's what I expect from Mitzi. Would have been disappointed without them. Your ride with lust, your mouth tasting the syrup of male pride and your loins rising to gather around you everything that the world has to offer you at this delicious moment . . . Well, hell, when you are there, there is the absolute best place to be.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|This is quite a poem, Mitzi - and what marvelous last three lines!|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|You sure know how to light up a page here with these writes.|