by William P Haynes
Saturday, March 12, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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rememberances of youth
There was a moment when you laughed
There was the day we stole the pies
From the store our parent's shopped
We took them home, ran thru the lot,
young thieves in love, not understood
We were born without a clue
to what's right, to what's wrong
Then it's gone and it's all over
Just a blinking of the stars
And it's all ours, And it's all ours
There was a moment when you
laughed and I remembered
the horror trader
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|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Checking a few of your oldies, I love them too, the mind is different
at different levels!
Waht kind of pie is/was your favorite!
Did you see the movie "American pie" ??? :)
WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Whimsically captivating verses, William. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|thenit's all gone all oer just the blinking of the stars... Then you laughed and I remembered. I like that! Childhood memories whether mine or yours always bring smiles to the face and heart. Thanks for this one. I'm remebering my neighborhood store, Food Town.
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|enjoyed the read|