|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Vesna this is totally mesmerizing! So beautifully connected, immersed in the essence of each others spirits;...Kudo's etw
"You are my centre
my spiritual clone
|Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
|A blessed place to be - free. R|
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|A beautiful celebration of loving union and the empowerment of the soul that can come with such dedicated "relating," (as one keeps in mind that "life is a verb, not a noun":-)|
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Beautiful work Vesna.
I especially liked these lines:
"notes ..holy.. ever playing the spheres
magic and motion...like tinkling chants
engage my heart to forever dance"
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Passionately romantic and captivating, Vesna. Beautifully done. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
|This loving and lovely poem with the rhythm of a song could well be one more flower in the garland of celebration of the Equinox (read Joseph*'s latest poem ;0)...). Isn't this an awesome feeling? :0)
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|This is so very beautiful Vesna. Each time you write, you write better than the one before. Keep on, keepin' on girl. May the Lor be with you always, and at your side constantly. With mych love, peace, & (((HUGS))), Barbie
"If I have to...Then I may as well be."
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Beauty through the words of simplicity|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a very beautiful and passionate romantic poem ...|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Well penned for sure...
Romance at it's finest....
|Reviewed by frank maiello (Reader)
|if i may say, you are obviously copiously blessed with the near exclusive capacity to transmit, unfiltered, unadulterated, the raw divine essence of that which rages primal in what can only be a cherub-sculptured human heart (whose experienced a soul's career of [cyclical] firebranded longing that knew no solace but in forlorne dreams).
resulting in a relatively decent poet. :-)
i shall therefore, by virtue of knowing such a one is manifest in this world, devise a whole new rhythm for pounding my pacific ocean drums!!
OM namo bhagavate srimata shaktaya!
OM namo namah!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|You Romantic You!!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|For passion such as this, nations have been erected . . . Heaven has been touched . . . Love has been defined . . . Ecstasy has become a way of life . . . In other words, it can't be defined.|
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
Life may beat this dream out of me yet, but it still lingers.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A truly captivating Ode to your One, Vesna.|
|Reviewed by Kenny Baez
|very moving testament of love.|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|This is alot like reading your heartbeats..Beautifully penned and felt.