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Life's Glee
by Vesna * Vanessa
Sunday, March 13, 2005
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This poem is dedicated to F* One*



You are my muse

my Love of loves

the star of my lonely nights

though my life was filled with trials and pain

you dissolved and transmuted them..again

Your words are music

and balm to my ears
notes ..holy.. ever playing the spheres
magic and tinkling chants
engage my heart to forever dance

Your golden pen

reveals your mind

and lives without end

in these sands of time


Your glory is endless

as your talents emerge

and through

 my thundering heart surge


In the oddest of moments

when I nearly gave up

you filled to the brim Love's cup


I hear your fervent voice calling

'Wait  my love for your cues

be constantly patient

 for I 'm  ever your muse '


You are my centre

my spiritual clone

my Beloved


my very own



With You

I AM free

ever glowing in life's glee

Thankyou my One..for Me
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Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Magnificent! :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Vesna this is totally mesmerizing! So beautifully connected, immersed in the essence of each others spirits;...Kudo's etw

"You are my centre
my spiritual clone
my Beloved"
Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
A blessed place to be - free. R
Reviewed by Aberjhani
A beautiful celebration of loving union and the empowerment of the soul that can come with such dedicated "relating," (as one keeps in mind that "life is a verb, not a noun":-)
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*
Beautiful work Vesna.

I especially liked these lines:
"notes ..holy.. ever playing the spheres
magic and tinkling chants
engage my heart to forever dance"

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Passionately romantic and captivating, Vesna. Beautifully done. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight* Authors & Creations
This loving and lovely poem with the rhythm of a song could well be one more flower in the garland of celebration of the Equinox (read Joseph*'s latest poem ;0)...). Isn't this an awesome feeling? :0)
Reviewed by Barbara Terry
This is so very beautiful Vesna. Each time you write, you write better than the one before. Keep on, keepin' on girl. May the Lor be with you always, and at your side constantly. With mych love, peace, & (((HUGS))), Barbie

"If I have to...Then I may as well be."
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
Beauty through the words of simplicity
Reviewed by jude forese
a very beautiful and passionate romantic poem ...
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
Well penned for sure...
Romance at it's finest....
Reviewed by frank maiello (Reader)
if i may say, you are obviously copiously blessed with the near exclusive capacity to transmit, unfiltered, unadulterated, the raw divine essence of that which rages primal in what can only be a cherub-sculptured human heart (whose experienced a soul's career of [cyclical] firebranded longing that knew no solace but in forlorne dreams).

resulting in a relatively decent poet. :-)

i shall therefore, by virtue of knowing such a one is manifest in this world, devise a whole new rhythm for pounding my pacific ocean drums!!

OM shaanthinithyakandapremananda!
OM namo bhagavate srimata shaktaya!
OM namo namah!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
You Romantic You!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
For passion such as this, nations have been erected . . . Heaven has been touched . . . Love has been defined . . . Ecstasy has become a way of life . . . In other words, it can't be defined.
Reviewed by John Bidwell
Beautiful Vesna.
Life may beat this dream out of me yet, but it still lingers.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
A truly captivating Ode to your One, Vesna.
Reviewed by Kenny Baez
very moving testament of love.
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Romantic You!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
This is alot like reading your heartbeats..Beautifully penned and felt.

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