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by Mr. Ed
Sunday, March 13, 2005
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“Living might mean taking chances
But they're worth taking
Lovin' might be a mistake
But it's worth making”


 


Mark D. Sanders & Tia Sillers,


I Hope You Dance


 


 


He was embittered and very much alone


His relationship days were now sadly over


He was heading off to the wild blue yonder


To live a hermit’s life in the untangled clover


 


She had hurt him to the very core


He was done with love and all too blue


It was really time to move along now


Time to figure out what the hell to do


 


He soon packed all of his belongings


And gassed up his old pickup truck


His love life days were surely over


His relationships had run out of luck


 


And he drove for many long lonely miles


Through pastures once filled with desire


But he had truly become a lone wolf now


To a life of solitude he would now aspire


 


But as he approached the mountains of no return


She was magically waiting there to hitch a ride


At first he didn’t think that he would even stop


But eventually he put aside his foolish pride


 


He pulled his truck over to the side of the road


Her demeanor quickly captivated his heart


And as they rolled along together in his truck


He was soon struck again by cupid’s love dart


 


 


Even though he had been hurt very badly


She soon managed to take all his pain away


And he’s forever grateful that he saw her there


And took a chance on love once again that day


 


They’ve been cruising life’s highway together


For many truly wonderful romantic years now


And he shudders to think what he might have become


If he hadn’t had the courage to brake and slow down


 


 


Don't let some hell bent heart
Leave you bitter
When you come close to selling out
Reconsider



And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance


 


I hope you dance”


 

 


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Reviewed by Kate Clifford 3/16/2005
I'm always up to a great dance, but taking a slight break for the moment :-) Wonderful message. Love is real :-)
Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga 3/16/2005
Dear Ed,

What an incredible write. You most certainly have the knack of touching deep, and I am with you on this one....Dance and dance well and with gusto, it is only a fool who sits it out !

warm hugs
Elga
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 3/14/2005
Ed,

Superaltive, quite superlative ... 'top-drawer' all the way!!


Best regards,

Robert
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 3/14/2005
One should alway choose to dance.....beautiful Ed...
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader) 3/14/2005
Top drawer, Eddie!
This is the best yet of all I have read of
your poems.
Keep on truckin'
Reviewed by jude forese 3/13/2005
excellent poem! reminds me of the theme i used in "the Bay of Circumstance" except the character made the other choice not to take a chance to pursue his heart ... again, well done!
Reviewed by Patrick McCormick 3/13/2005
Beautiful poem Ed. Never give up on love.

Pat
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 3/13/2005
wonderful story within this powerful write! very well done, angel eddie!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 3/13/2005
Ed,

Nobody weaves stories like you do. This is no exception--I, too, believe it is one of your best. BRAVO!

((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla. :(
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 3/13/2005
Our lives can either be unbelievably damaged or inexpressibly redeemed by JUST ONE... this is delightfully told, Ed, and I hope that it will encourage those who might be tempted to say "Never Again!" to reconsider and to not only hope but EXPECT that they will get to meet the one special person who will turn their life around... perhaps more so than if they had met before. Any excuse to get the dancin shoes on, at any rate!! And you always manage to get a furry friend in there somewhere... Kayote Kate xx
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader) 3/13/2005
Absolutely wonderful, Ed! From beginning to end ... We have the same taste in songs too ;)
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/13/2005
Wow Ed! What a splendid piece of writing! You are awesome
when you write like this! Nothing like sharing life's
experiences when you have the ability and talent to do it
the way you do! Kudo's!

etw
Reviewed by George Jackson 3/13/2005
Ed...this touched me in a deep, fundemental way, for reasons of my own. To me, one of the very best you've written so far.
Reviewed by Nordette Adams 3/13/2005
Delighful, endearing, and oozing hope for the rest of us, Ed! An offering delivered by the true romantic who has lived the great love story himself in truth. ;-) ~~Nordette
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 3/13/2005
Nice bio Ed.

You are living proof of being a lucky bar...I mean winner..
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 3/13/2005
excellent words, like the graphic too
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 3/13/2005
I've been through the same thing, but it took me 15 years to finally apply the brakes.
Good one Ed...
Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks 3/13/2005
As your beautiful and wise poem relates, life can be "long lonely miles", but only if one doesn't have the courage to live it! Well done, Ed. - M
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 3/13/2005
He would have been better off passing and let her get picked up by someone else...lousy opinion I realize, but its what I would have done, hurt too many times is enough...ed
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/13/2005
Thank you for sharing this!!

Something to ponder...and read over and over again!!

Powerful message in this one!!

Love Tinky
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 3/13/2005
It's those last two lines that hold the real power-punch here, for me, Little Eddie. It's one thing to relive pain and say it out loud, but it's entirely cool and poetic to set it to such vibrant, gut-wrenching, gloriously joyful verse, as you've done. This was a biographical piece of magic, indeed. katy xox
Reviewed by George Carroll 3/13/2005
Splendid write Ed, Hope springs eternal the second time around.
Reviewed by Henry Stevens 3/13/2005
A beautiful poem of encouragement. Thanks, Ed.
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 3/13/2005
Well this will certainly provide the music to dance to Ed.
Touching, sad and beautiful sentiments.

Lisa

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Where The Redwing Sings

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