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Liberty Lost by Carrie A Deveney Monday, March 14, 2005 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan
I was laid in the dirt Worshipping the dust around me Looking up to a sky Lost in a sea of clouds Bloody tears run down my face As I see the body count Written in the stars How do so many screams Reach nothing but deaf ears Our liberty dragged around Like a mop cleaning filth Which we made But blamed on others.

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray	3/22/2005

You are a powerful poetic voice. Your imagery enhances the meaning of your creation. Plus, your brevity of words is refreshing. Thank you, Carrie. Love and peace to you. Regis




Reviewed by Felix Perry	3/14/2005

Two home runs in one day, this is also one hell of a great write and begs the reader to look at what you are saying of the deaths of the innocent. You have done well in both these works today. Felix