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Liberty Lost
by Carrie A Deveney

Monday, March 14, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I was laid in the dirt


Worshipping the dust around me


Looking up to a sky


Lost in a sea of clouds


Bloody tears run down my face


As I see the body count


Written in the stars


How do so many screams


Reach nothing but deaf ears


Our liberty dragged around


Like a mop cleaning filth


Which we made


                               But blamed on others.

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/22/2005
You are a powerful poetic voice. Your imagery enhances the meaning of your creation. Plus, your brevity of words is refreshing. Thank you, Carrie. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Felix Perry 3/14/2005
Two home runs in one day, this is also one hell of a great write and begs the reader to look at what you are saying of the deaths of the innocent. You have done well in both these works today.

Felix



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