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Carrie A Deveney

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by Carrie A Deveney

Monday, March 14, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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My shadow stalks me


And flattens me into


A one dimensional person


I’ll wave my arms


For rescue


But you won’t come


I need saving


But appear as a stiff column


Impenetrable


But only the shadow of one


And only my shadows know me


But save me?


No, I have to strip them away


From my skin


To lose myself


In the delusions of a victim


                                        To do that.

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/22/2005
Some people think they write poetry. Some people write poetry. You write poetry. This is very soul grasping. Thank you, Carrie. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Mary Quire 3/14/2005
Very insightful. I never thought of a shadow in that way before.

M.Rose
Reviewed by Felix Perry 3/14/2005
This is one of your best and I love the vivid flattened and pillared images so real to the mind. Great work of art.

Felix
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/14/2005
Excellent metaphor, intense poem, superbly written!

etw
Reviewed by Henry Stevens 3/14/2005
Good images use of words. Good poem. Henry
Reviewed by Kenny Baez 3/14/2005
well done, substance and shadow in this poem.



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