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|Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
|I liked your very unorthodox rhyming technique here,it creates a lot of tension within the poem, the kind of mood one would expect during this kind of schism|
|Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
|I loved the image "and my tears will be a christening for anybody listening", and the whole exhortation is powerfully engaging. I hope that many more may cross the bridge over this rift, because your poetry is well worth discovering.