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| Reviewed by Ian Thorpe |
3/15/2005 |
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| I liked your very unorthodox rhyming technique here,it creates a lot of tension within the poem, the kind of mood one would expect during this kind of schism |
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| Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations |
3/15/2005 |
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I loved the image "and my tears will be a christening for anybody listening", and the whole exhortation is powerfully engaging. I hope that many more may cross the bridge over this rift, because your poetry is well worth discovering.
Love&Light*
Alexandra* |
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