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Neon Breezes
by M. R. B.
Tuesday, March 15, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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A little whimsy goes a long way...
--------------------------------------------

 
Catching a ride on the
back of the wind
kissing 
cotton candy clouds
soaring and swooping
as the heights ascend
far from the
urban crowds
ribbons of neon 
etched
on the sky
breezes
chasing my tail
birds and the eagles
envy my fly 
with the winds 
we set sail
circles of infinity
braiding the air
honeysuckle breezes
sugar sweet
sun and the earth 
having an affair
kisses of
celestial conceit
catching a ride
on the tails of the
breeze
ascending to
magical heights
soaring and swooping
higher than trees
me and my shadow
flying kites

©  MRD 2005
 

       

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Reviewed by Roger Ochs 7/10/2005
Both sweet and whimsical. I especially enjoy your sensory amalgams.
Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore 5/18/2005
what a beautiful evocation! i was there, wit'cha, just flowin' on the breeze! a delightful read, poet!
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 5/13/2005
Your imagery is wonderful....another gem from you!!!!
Reviewed by E. Richardson 5/2/2005
I am not sure how I missed this piece of your...but I am glad I found it tonight. It composition is excellent...and the message...well, it reminded me of one summer long ago when my sons and I built a 20 foot dragon kite from scratch. They called it Smaug after the dragon in the Hobbit. As a child, I built and flew a variety of kites, but that summer was the best. Thanks for the good memory lane trip, lady poet.
Reviewed by Huda Orfali 4/3/2005
beautiful imagery and superb poem
Love and peace
Huda
Reviewed by M. B. 3/28/2005
Spring darling, wuz up?
I love you MORE!
heheheee

~Mom
Reviewed by Spring Cruz (Reader) 3/28/2005
Hi Mom. I told you that you were going to be famous.....Neon Breezes is a great title for this. It goes well the imagery. Great job! I love you.

Spring
Reviewed by Henry Lefevre 3/23/2005
It's fun flying all kinds of kites
Even when we used them for fights.
With sharp spines protruding
Attacking, eluding,
We'd down everything in our sights.

Hank
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 3/22/2005
Mari,

The rhythm, the rhyme, the verse - a poetic treat ... marvelous, simply marvelous!!

Best wishes,

Robert
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 3/21/2005
What a lovely poem, beautiful imagery!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 3/21/2005

"Neon Breezes" lights up the way to imagination and stands to give
maps and charters to wonderlands through its rich imagery and rhythm
of poetic grandiose.

Healthy Day to All.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J 3/20/2005
Wonderful imagery, my friend. Simply cute!!!

Love from India - Joel -
Reviewed by Nordette Adams 3/20/2005
What a joy to read, Mari! Delightful imagery and wonderful rhythm. I could feel the breezes. ~~Nordette
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight* 3/19/2005
I really like how you did this Mari,
especially the ending.

I love to fly kites and, when not doing so,
I derive as much pleasure out of just
staring at the clouds and the sky.

Blessings,
Joseph
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 3/19/2005
You made me dizzy reading this but the effort was well worth a little discomfort. LOL That's what I get for chasing my own tail, I guess. LOL2
Reviewed by Paul Williams 3/19/2005
A beautiful voice of expression portrayed with stunning imagery...excellent Mari

Paul;-]
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 3/19/2005
Catching a ride on the tails of a breeze, sounds majestical to me.
Lest someone shoots the breeze..
Reviewed by A PAX 3/18/2005
Oh lovely Mari!
beautiful images..........so gentle and clear
pax A
Reviewed by David Young 3/18/2005
Beautiful verse in these neon breezes.
Reviewed by Janice Engle(rainbows) 3/18/2005
Beautiful ! May I post this in my Ezines?
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 3/18/2005
I think you have expressed the freedom and joy of the spirits of both of you in this write, Mari! Kites, by their very nature, bring out these liberating, playful and delightful frissons in us and your form and expression capture the mood and description well. Just the weather for it, to! Fly high, Mari! LOL Kate xx
Reviewed by jacqueline amos 3/17/2005
I love your writing, you can take a poet into reality, with just the touch of your pen, continue to write master poet, you are really good.
Reviewed by Dave Harm 3/17/2005
A beautiful, fantasy filled, "magic carpet ride."
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 3/17/2005
Love the thought wave in this one. Great write and thanks for the imagery.
Reviewed by William Bonilla 3/17/2005
Mari
this was a beautiful piece
Well Penned

William .....Peace & Love
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 3/17/2005
BRILLIANT work! Creativity at its best!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 3/16/2005
A high flying write. Lovely work Mari.

Peace
Reviewed by L. Figgins 3/16/2005
As a child, I imagined myself orchestrating the wind and I had dreams of flying. This poem reminded me of this and of the song that contained the lyric, "when I was a child...my hands felt like two balloons". The rhythm of this poem is like a balloon(kite)being tossed on the wind. Whimsy is a word I haven't visited lately, so I thank you, Mari.
Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com 3/16/2005
I see a background of pink clouds, little specks on a canvas representing people too busy to stop and look up, and a flirty little rag on the end of a pointed stick that is shaped like a cross. If there were kites in the middle east 2,000 years ago, Jesus would have flown one.

blessin's, a very light and lovely right Mari.
cynth'ya lewis reed
Reviewed by Aberjhani 3/16/2005
A breathless flight of brilliant fantasy. Illustrates the ability of a soul set free to harness the power of imagination and not only fly however high it will, but to share the lovely journey with others:-)
Reviewed by Sue Hess 3/16/2005
nice ride...i enjoyed
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/16/2005
I have used the expression "cotton candy clouds" in one of my poems a long time ago so this really hit home. I love the fantasy feel through your imagery. Thank you, Mari. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 3/16/2005
Uplifting, soaring visuals and feel to this one--I believe you have penned a winner! EXCELLENT!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Saving this--THANK YOU!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/16/2005
I love this Mari! My kind of travel;-) Beautifully creative!
Stunning visuals!

etw
Reviewed by Herman Neuman 3/16/2005
Dear Mari,

Thank you for again sharing another one of your imagination creation observation poems. I just love them. They say so much with minimum words. And they descibe our present-day harsh reality, the one which my mind loves to dwell on, and in, on a daily basis.

My last ear is going rapidly, and is doing so, while happily whistling.

Many Hugs.
Reviewed by Dale Clark 3/16/2005
I love the imagery in this. So many
great lines and words contained.
"Cotton candy clouds" Wow! "me and
my shadow flying kites" This one needs
rereading. Super!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 3/16/2005
Catching a ride on the wind is marvelous, as is this poem, Mari.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/16/2005
A delightful read!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by George Jackson 3/16/2005
Graceful, lovely poem. Really liked the premise.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 3/16/2005
Sounds like a wonderful magical ride and do you think your shadow would mind if I tagged along, I'm free today and we could spin words over the skies together. Wonderful imagery Mari, love this one.

Felix
Reviewed by George Carroll 3/16/2005
Beautiful descriptive write on a fantasy journey, "Me and my shadow flying kites." Great writing.
Reviewed by Barbara Terry 3/16/2005
I agree with Mary, this is so beautiful and the imagery of the clouds, the birds and 'kisses of celestial conceit catching a ride on the tails of the breeze'. And they call the wind Maria. Very beautiful Mari. May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & (((HUGS))), Barbie

"If I have to...Then I may as well be."
Reviewed by Mary Quire 3/16/2005
The imagery is breathtaking. Sun and the earth having an affair...this is my favorite line. I never thought of describing it that way. Nicely done.

M.Rose



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