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| Reviewed by Roger Ochs |
7/10/2005 |
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| Both sweet and whimsical. I especially enjoy your sensory amalgams. |
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| Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore |
5/18/2005 |
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| what a beautiful evocation! i was there, wit'cha, just flowin' on the breeze! a delightful read, poet! |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
5/13/2005 |
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| Your imagery is wonderful....another gem from you!!!! |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
5/2/2005 |
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| I am not sure how I missed this piece of your...but I am glad I found it tonight. It composition is excellent...and the message...well, it reminded me of one summer long ago when my sons and I built a 20 foot dragon kite from scratch. They called it Smaug after the dragon in the Hobbit. As a child, I built and flew a variety of kites, but that summer was the best. Thanks for the good memory lane trip, lady poet. |
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| Reviewed by Huda Orfali |
4/3/2005 |
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beautiful imagery and superb poem
Love and peace
Huda |
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| Reviewed by M. B. |
3/28/2005 |
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Spring darling, wuz up?
I love you MORE!
heheheee
~Mom |
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| Reviewed by Spring Cruz (Reader) |
3/28/2005 |
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Hi Mom. I told you that you were going to be famous.....Neon Breezes is a great title for this. It goes well the imagery. Great job! I love you.
Spring |
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| Reviewed by Henry Lefevre |
3/23/2005 |
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It's fun flying all kinds of kites
Even when we used them for fights.
With sharp spines protruding
Attacking, eluding,
We'd down everything in our sights.
Hank
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
3/22/2005 |
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Mari,
The rhythm, the rhyme, the verse - a poetic treat ... marvelous, simply marvelous!!
Best wishes,
Robert |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
3/21/2005 |
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What a lovely poem, beautiful imagery!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
3/21/2005 |
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"Neon Breezes" lights up the way to imagination and stands to give
maps and charters to wonderlands through its rich imagery and rhythm
of poetic grandiose.
Healthy Day to All.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J |
3/20/2005 |
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Wonderful imagery, my friend. Simply cute!!!
Love from India - Joel - |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
3/20/2005 |
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| What a joy to read, Mari! Delightful imagery and wonderful rhythm. I could feel the breezes. ~~Nordette |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
3/19/2005 |
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I really like how you did this Mari,
especially the ending.
I love to fly kites and, when not doing so,
I derive as much pleasure out of just
staring at the clouds and the sky.
Blessings,
Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
3/19/2005 |
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| You made me dizzy reading this but the effort was well worth a little discomfort. LOL That's what I get for chasing my own tail, I guess. LOL2 |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
3/19/2005 |
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A beautiful voice of expression portrayed with stunning imagery...excellent Mari
Paul;-] |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
3/19/2005 |
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Catching a ride on the tails of a breeze, sounds majestical to me.
Lest someone shoots the breeze.. |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
3/18/2005 |
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Oh lovely Mari!
beautiful images..........so gentle and clear
pax A |
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| Reviewed by David Young |
3/18/2005 |
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| Beautiful verse in these neon breezes. |
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| Reviewed by Janice Engle(rainbows) |
3/18/2005 |
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| Beautiful ! May I post this in my Ezines? |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
3/18/2005 |
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| I think you have expressed the freedom and joy of the spirits of both of you in this write, Mari! Kites, by their very nature, bring out these liberating, playful and delightful frissons in us and your form and expression capture the mood and description well. Just the weather for it, to! Fly high, Mari! LOL Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by jacqueline amos |
3/17/2005 |
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| I love your writing, you can take a poet into reality, with just the touch of your pen, continue to write master poet, you are really good. |
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| Reviewed by Dave Harm |
3/17/2005 |
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| A beautiful, fantasy filled, "magic carpet ride." |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
3/17/2005 |
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| Love the thought wave in this one. Great write and thanks for the imagery. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
3/17/2005 |
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Mari
this was a beautiful piece
Well Penned
William .....Peace & Love |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
3/17/2005 |
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BRILLIANT work! Creativity at its best!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Handsum Hart |
3/16/2005 |
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A high flying write. Lovely work Mari.
Peace |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
3/16/2005 |
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| As a child, I imagined myself orchestrating the wind and I had dreams of flying. This poem reminded me of this and of the song that contained the lyric, "when I was a child...my hands felt like two balloons". The rhythm of this poem is like a balloon(kite)being tossed on the wind. Whimsy is a word I haven't visited lately, so I thank you, Mari. |
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com |
3/16/2005 |
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I see a background of pink clouds, little specks on a canvas representing people too busy to stop and look up, and a flirty little rag on the end of a pointed stick that is shaped like a cross. If there were kites in the middle east 2,000 years ago, Jesus would have flown one.
blessin's, a very light and lovely right Mari.
cynth'ya lewis reed |
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| Reviewed by Aberjhani |
3/16/2005 |
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| A breathless flight of brilliant fantasy. Illustrates the ability of a soul set free to harness the power of imagination and not only fly however high it will, but to share the lovely journey with others:-) |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
3/16/2005 |
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| nice ride...i enjoyed |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/16/2005 |
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| I have used the expression "cotton candy clouds" in one of my poems a long time ago so this really hit home. I love the fantasy feel through your imagery. Thank you, Mari. Love and peace to you. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/16/2005 |
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Uplifting, soaring visuals and feel to this one--I believe you have penned a winner! EXCELLENT!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Saving this--THANK YOU! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/16/2005 |
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I love this Mari! My kind of travel;-) Beautifully creative!
Stunning visuals!
etw
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| Reviewed by Herman Neuman |
3/16/2005 |
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Dear Mari,
Thank you for again sharing another one of your imagination creation observation poems. I just love them. They say so much with minimum words. And they descibe our present-day harsh reality, the one which my mind loves to dwell on, and in, on a daily basis.
My last ear is going rapidly, and is doing so, while happily whistling.
Many Hugs. |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
3/16/2005 |
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I love the imagery in this. So many
great lines and words contained.
"Cotton candy clouds" Wow! "me and
my shadow flying kites" This one needs
rereading. Super! |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
3/16/2005 |
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| Catching a ride on the wind is marvelous, as is this poem, Mari. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/16/2005 |
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A delightful read!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by George Jackson |
3/16/2005 |
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| Graceful, lovely poem. Really liked the premise. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/16/2005 |
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Sounds like a wonderful magical ride and do you think your shadow would mind if I tagged along, I'm free today and we could spin words over the skies together. Wonderful imagery Mari, love this one.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
3/16/2005 |
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| Beautiful descriptive write on a fantasy journey, "Me and my shadow flying kites." Great writing. |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
3/16/2005 |
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I agree with Mary, this is so beautiful and the imagery of the clouds, the birds and 'kisses of celestial conceit catching a ride on the tails of the breeze'. And they call the wind Maria. Very beautiful Mari. May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & (((HUGS))), Barbie
"If I have to...Then I may as well be." |
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| Reviewed by Mary Quire |
3/16/2005 |
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The imagery is breathtaking. Sun and the earth having an affair...this is my favorite line. I never thought of describing it that way. Nicely done.
M.Rose |
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