The dos and don’ts of a great hard on
by Deborah Richards
Friday, March 18, 2005
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The dos and don’ts of a great hard on
He came to think of nothing more
as I gave into the belief the dos of him resting in me, his penis opening me, suffocating the walls that have been closed what it seems like forever,
I spread like a rose that opens it self up to sunshine’s rays and dews wetness,
Giving life where life was not, taking me, alive I have become, twisted with hunger, passion controls the ora of the dos that he gives me,
Like ache I can only endure its pain, as I lay awoke to sexually desires and the smell of the odor that stimulates me,
We eyes opened I walk into its welling soul, asking for nothing put the dos of a hard lay,
A mixture of him and me, what a cumbo,
An all I say is take me,
As hell as no fiery like the fire that burns, I want him, his rise to fame, is what I make it to do, assisting with pleasure, my soul is damned for him, he plagues me like the lust I seek,
A seekers soul, sold to sex, giving away to the hunger I feel for him,
Yes the does of a good lay, the don’ts of not getting it,
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
3/23/2005 |
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| Okay, girl, I see that you're another one that I, being a single woman, will not be able to read without taking a antiheat pill or some other antidote first to make sure I don't explode and do something foolish like go on date with some man I usually would ignore. LOL. Dangerous stuff here. Lord, help me. ~~Nordette |
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| Reviewed by D May (Reader) |
3/22/2005 |
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| Interesting write. The title of this really grabbed me and your write was great. |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
3/22/2005 |
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yes yes yes i see where your cumming from
wish this had a pic to it :D jk
enjoyed this tantalizing write |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
3/18/2005 |
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| fun fun fun |
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| Reviewed by Dave Harm |
3/18/2005 |
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| Very enjoyable..."A mixture of him and me, what a cumbo" ... just perfect... |
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| Reviewed by john zimmerman |
3/18/2005 |
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good write
j+ |
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| Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J |
3/18/2005 |
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Fantastic write, the last lines is a stunner for sure:) :)
Love from India - Joel - |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
3/18/2005 |
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| wow, do i ever know the truth in those last few words...a hard what? |
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