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The dos and doníts of a great hard on
by Deborah Richards
Friday, March 18, 2005
Rated "R" by the Author.
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The dos and doníts of a great hard on

He came to think of nothing more
as I gave into the belief the dos of him resting in me, his penis opening me, suffocating the walls that have been closed what it seems like forever,

I spread like a rose that opens it self up to sunshineís rays and dews wetness,

Giving life where life was not, taking me, alive I have become, twisted with hunger, passion controls the ora of the dos that he gives me,

Like ache I can only endure its pain, as I lay awoke to sexually desires and the smell of the odor that stimulates me,

We eyes opened I walk into its welling soul, asking for nothing put the dos of a hard lay,

A mixture of him and me, what a cumbo,

An all I say is take me,

As hell as no fiery like the fire that burns, I want him, his rise to fame, is what I make it to do, assisting with pleasure, my soul is damned for him, he plagues me like the lust I seek,

A seekers soul, sold to sex, giving away to the hunger I feel for him,

Yes the does of a good lay, the doníts of not getting it,

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Reviewed by Nordette Adams 3/23/2005
Okay, girl, I see that you're another one that I, being a single woman, will not be able to read without taking a antiheat pill or some other antidote first to make sure I don't explode and do something foolish like go on date with some man I usually would ignore. LOL. Dangerous stuff here. Lord, help me. ~~Nordette
Reviewed by D May (Reader) 3/22/2005
Interesting write. The title of this really grabbed me and your write was great.
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 3/22/2005
yes yes yes i see where your cumming from
wish this had a pic to it :D jk

enjoyed this tantalizing write
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 3/18/2005
fun fun fun
Reviewed by Dave Harm 3/18/2005
Very enjoyable..."A mixture of him and me, what a cumbo" ... just perfect...
Reviewed by john zimmerman 3/18/2005
good write

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J 3/18/2005
Fantastic write, the last lines is a stunner for sure:) :)

Love from India - Joel -
Reviewed by Sue Hess 3/18/2005
wow, do i ever know the truth in those last few words...a hard what?
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