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Oh touches, I want to arouse you so.
In the highest level of pure satisfaction,
From the highest mountain’s pleasures
Into the deepest valley’s sensuality.
Riding the waves of free spirited love,
Smelling the fragrance of combustion,
Of two people bonding together softly,
Words walking together inside beauty.
This flowering has no time frames,
Scheduled for quick gratification.
What is implanted here blossoms
Upon the blessings of special times.
Walkways of lush green vegetation,
Mists showering of nature’s revival,
Dancing lovebirds cooing tranquility,
Chorus of harmony and true devotion.
The true horizon of our mutual landscape
Reaches beyond the confining seascape,
Rising among formations of cloudscapes,
Migrating into the heavens of moonscapes.
Reaching starbursts of star flower pedals.
Climaxing with such great sensual passion
In the meteors storm of fire escapes,
Placing “Do Not Disturb” signs, everywhere.
Note: Which is a better ending, everywhere or upon heaven?
Somewhere in America not on company time 03/23/05 ©
The Terminated Free Spirited Poet
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|Reviewed by Denise Edwards
|Everywhere is perfect for this ending!
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|I agree...everywhere...beautiful David...
|Reviewed by Henry Stevens
|Everywhere. Think of all the Do Not Distrub that are up right now. And the ones that are going up in the next second? Good poem./Henry|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
I agree with Tinka - "everywhere" ... excellent!!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|I will stick to "everywhere"....that includes heaven aswell....right?