|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|super duper cool piece Mark, I tell my wife everyday that inorder for her to help herself she should face up, it's like talking to a wall though. I faced up and I am a better person for it, nowhere near perfect but a little better. My wife keeps slipping in the mud with her superior know it all attitude, blame game, it's everyone elses fault etc|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Many truisms which give pause to stop and reflect here, Mark. To keep going deeper into things is the way to stay afloat and to move on... trouble is we have a natural tendency to live life like a shallow puddle, not realising how we are either stagnating or just plain drying up! But boy oh boy is it true that we never forget our mistakes and failures... well, perhaps it is others who never let us?! Good thoughts worth holding onto - TY Kate x|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|You have some good thoughts there in this poem. Wonderful write, Mark!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Michael Rayel
|Brief but profound!|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Very unique ... profound - outstanding!!
|Reviewed by Mary Quire
|Very powerful thoughts.
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|lots of meaningful truths
thoughts and emotions here
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Short but very meaningful in expressive thought and emotion. Thank you, Mark. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Love the message in this excellent short poem, Mark!
(It surfs beautifully over the waves;D)
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|excellent write, mark! well done! :)|
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|as your words will never die...this is short and sweet|