What's My Problem?
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Wednesday, March 23, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Problems, we all have them, different titles, different degrees, but problems just the same.
My problems are the same as yours,
if you came through earths doors.
They may have a different name,
but they're problems just the same.
Don't feel rained on and all alone,
problems will be around till we're gone.
Some are worse than others in nature,
the heart and soul they do capture.
Handling the problem distinguishes,
seperates and relinquishes.
One person crying,
another one defying,
daring a problem to defeat,
change the body to dead meat.
Sooner or later even the strongest
then eventually succumb.
Its the thrill of the fight,
not the evil of the fright.
Weak or strong,
where is it best to belong?
The fright will devour,
the fight will help even the score,
help open the door,
make life more appealing.
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|Reviewed by Phyllis Du'Gas
|Reviewed by Saundra Washington D.D.
|Wonderful! Wish those who feel they have a monopoly on problems understood this. Great work!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Nicley done Grady!!
Happy Easter To You Again ;p !!
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
|Well, now that that problem is cleared up. Great write, Grady.
Thanks for stopping by. :o)
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Yes we all have them; great write.|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Nice write, G. Enjoyed.|
|Reviewed by Jennifer Ragan (Reader)
|That was awesome!
You should sumit that to a teen magazine