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Brush With You
by John H Bidwell

Wednesday, March 23, 2005
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To one really special lady. Wow.

Brush With You

The world has yet to invent a roller coaster
That could come even close
To the ride I just had.
It may have stopped; the bar may have gone up,
I may be free to go,
But I can’t move.
All I can do is ask myself…
“What just happened?”
I had a brush with you.
I knew I was a dreamer,
Sort of a given in the back of my mind.
But I did not have a clue how far I could get.
You made me scream, “Fire” in a crowded movie theater
And I was sincere.
“What just happened?”
I went from Mr. Rational Guy
To somebody who believes in witchcraft,
Magic spells, and Dragons.
I met you.
This sort of thing does not happen to me.
I did not put you on that pedestal,
I just looked up and saw you there.
And whatever possessed me to ask you
To come down and dance with me
I will never know,
But I heard my voice asking.
What will forever change my life is this…
I got your attention. You paused,
Not just for a second- for days.
I’ll keep your secret.
I got to take the ride of my life-
Believing this could actually happen.
At least I learned something good about myself.
There really is no dream so high
That my heart is afraid to give it a shot.
There really is no barrier it won’t cross
In an effort to believe in what it feels.
For that, you will always be in this heart-
But hidden as safely as you want to be.
Nobody will ever know.
If the questionnaire comes down to me
Asking about life changing experiences,
Miracles, magic, faire tales, fantasies…
I’ll just put “NA.”

John H. Bidwell

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Reviewed by jude forese 3/26/2005
like it!
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 3/26/2005
hahahaha

yes like your style
teasingly passionate
enjoyed
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/25/2005
A beautiful romantic offering that is a wonderful gift, John. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Nordette Adams 3/24/2005
What a whirling romantic you are, John, and a good writer as well. This poem blesses me. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Alain Gracio 3/24/2005
I liked the rollercoaster metaphor!
Inventive and imaginative
Cheers
Alain
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 3/24/2005
Damn the torpedoes, full steam ahead, sir!
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 3/24/2005
Hmmm? I'm gone for a few days and when I get back...you've been Wowed! *grin*
I'm glad to know you've found a sense of peace and comfort..not only with somebody but within yourself.
Quite the mysterious and romantic write John! I enjoyed it!

Lisa
Reviewed by Felix Perry 3/24/2005
Wonderfully magic write that makes one want to say good for you John, these brushes are few and far between in this life and they my not last forever but they last forever in our memories.

Felix
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/24/2005
Oh I agree with Eileen Here!!

If any stardust left...send it by mail....lol!!

Some peole have all the luck stars gooooing their way ;p!!

Happy Romantic Easter To You!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by L. Figgins 3/23/2005
Kismet. It happened to me once, a very short space in time that hung suspended. A magical thing...
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/23/2005
An exciting esoteric romantic write John!
Glad there is some stardust coming your way;-)

Would love to have a sprinkle, myself;-)

etw
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 3/23/2005
Mysterious and wonderfully romantic write.
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