|Reviewed by Tactfully Naive
|'Did you reap as you deceived?'
'Was your pasture barbed or fenced?'
Right to the bottom of the heart with the first line. The heart is desparately deceitful, who can know it? Barbed or fenced? Thank God that Christ's open for us to enter. I await His sequal with hope.
Lade with unchartered gems, Anita. An open seam for me to mine.
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|Excellent poem. Pretty horrifying this human mammal.
did you reap as you deceived?
Thank you so much for this superb poem and
the quote of Mark Twain
Bravo! to the two of you
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|I agree, very haunting write, extremely well done.|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|That's one bad apple.
This is like reading a nightmare. Dark poetic imagery.
Really brings the vilest horror to life...
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|b r r r r|
|Reviewed by Jennifer Ragan (Reader)
|You have a very nice style...
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|I don't think I could say it better than, Eileen. It was POEtic after Edgar Allen. ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Anita, horrific events inspired by the evil one spreads
and encompaasses the innocent causing more evil. This
is a chilling mind blowing poem and graphic! Kudo's!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|If this was meant to scare the morals back into the unjust it sure scared me. Absolutely spellbinding poem combined with a killer graphic...winner here for sure.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|I agree Anita!!
I also wish we could all be a little NICER to each
other...and did it my way!!
But without luck...I failed being the kind one!!
Happy easter to you sis!!
|Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J
|Yes, it is a wish that never really comes true. Some find pleasure only in hating and seeing pain in another is their game.
Love from India - Joel -