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Time Tales: Virgo, The Virgin Mother
by Erin E Kelly-Moen
Friday, March 25, 2005
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Bless me, Mother, for I have sinned. Virgo-Church, craft
A Mother Ship for seas of doctrined birth,
Unspoiled by tattered breach of torpedo draft,
Worded without contemporary worth.

Hold me, Mother, I sense the windy whales
Seeking retrieval of religious bream;
Avowals of virginity, betrayals,
Inexperience, flailed, with murdered dreams.

Relationships have changed… Woman!
Parthenogenesis, birthed androgynous…
No Father near for Virgin’s tidal span.
Invertebrate created. All of Us.

Virtue, with virgin birth, missioned, placed on
Mother Earth, dare to care – heed new day's dawn!

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 3/25/05

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Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 3/29/2005

Deep, very deep; your poetic uniqueness is superlative!!

Best wishes,

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 3/29/2005
A powerfully written, "wake up call" poem! Dang, this is so good! Erin, I applaud your creative intellect! I'm saving this one.
Reviewed by jude forese 3/27/2005
a deeply motivated and profoundly written poem ...
Reviewed by Dana Matthews (Reader) 3/26/2005
- thumb kiss -

D a n a ;o)
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 3/25/2005

This composition is one to be studied and considered as a key to open the esoteric doors of the seven chambers of darkness to reach the passage way to Light and true living without the TRANCE of hypnotic imposition by the slave masters of the so called modern times, (The last twenty-four centuries.)and most of all to understand the difference of Mammon-Money and productive richness.

From this first reading I have gathered this thought:
- "The mystic, history, or theodicy can't comment on embriology,
to show in Bethlehem or Judea any new born of " Virgo " or any Mary."

It is a challenge always to read profound poetic-philosophical composition of the excellence of
"Time Tales: Virgo, The Virgin Mother".

I salute You, Sublime Poet!
Healthy Creative Springtime.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Nordette Adams 3/25/2005
You always serve us a rich plate for thought. ~~Nordette
Reviewed by Aberjhani 3/25/2005
I have to agree: every line packs knowledge, power, and passion. A great write indeed.
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 3/25/2005
Damn, you say so much with so little...ed
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