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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/28/2005 |
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| Inspiring and captivating, Dawn. Thank you for sharing this poetic beauty. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/28/2005 |
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This is fantastic imagery Dawn!So good to see you writing again!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/28/2005 |
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love will lead us to the truth ...
your imagery races around my head like a horse galloping across a field of creative ideals ...
excellent poetry! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/28/2005 |
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Dawn,
God, this is soaring! I felt like I was back on the cruise ship, on a brand new adventure to unseen places! Take me anywhere you want to go, I'll follow your brilliant pen!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by John Bidwell |
3/28/2005 |
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So wonderful to see you again.
And quite a ride you give with this enchanting piece.
Sail on indeed.
John |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
3/28/2005 |
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| Wonderful insightful write. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
3/28/2005 |
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| My goodness, how I have missed you, Dawn!! Perhaps we never quite realise until we come back to visit people's pages again, but it is a pure joy to read you again. I have missed your particular brand of artistry, your strength of articulation and the sharpness with which you capture those "washing around" emotions of the deeper self. A wonderful metaphor and strongly sustained. Some sharply etched lines here. TY Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
3/28/2005 |
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| This is outstanding! Brava! |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
3/28/2005 |
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| A lovely, wonderful write, Dawn... |
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| Reviewed by D May (Reader) |
3/28/2005 |
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| Dawn--a wonderful write. How I adore your work! |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
3/28/2005 |
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| Beautifully penned, Dawn! So much to enjoy in this creation! |
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| Reviewed by Henry Stevens |
3/28/2005 |
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| WOW Great poem, great images. Beautiful. Henry |
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| Reviewed by Jeff Mason |
3/28/2005 |
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I like the sailing metaphors, and the explosiveness of lines like, "eons that elude me in memory
but roar like an angry ocean
in the deep of my soul." -- Jeff
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/28/2005 |
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Deep thought provoking read!!
Love Tinka |
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