Explorer
by Debra A. Barone
Monday, March 28, 2005
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I explored a new world today. My tired hands awoke while traveling across the endless boundaries of you. My fingers spread, feeling the follicles of your pores. I close my fingers, touch your chest, pressing my hand into your valley resting there…. I travel upwards to your shoulder Where my fingers climb hills upwards to the horizon where neck meets jaw. I rest there, cupping your face in my hands. Then I travel to the stars and back; the stars that shine in your eyes. And so, I continue my journey into the valleys, hills and sky of you. Janet Wulsin never had it this good.
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
3/29/2005 |
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Very good Debra, so moving, so erotic, so peaceful, and much enjoyment. I raise my glass of lemonade to all those who find true love, and if that love is sensuously erotic, so be it. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & (((HUGS))), Barbie
"If I have to...Then I may as well be." |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/28/2005 |
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| very subtle, moving erotica ... |
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