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If I could, I would, but I can't, so I won't...
by Ed Matlack

Tuesday, March 29, 2005
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Very unusual category for me to delve into...

If I could, I would, but I can’t, so I won’t…


 


It started with a hit,


Progressing to a bowl,


Sometimes a fat doobie,


Then came the water pipe,


My addiction deserves little hype…


 


I have not done so for a few months,


Though I did fall off the wagon once,


Just a quickie hit, in memory of the past,


It was almost like I didn’t like it,


But my mind knew better quite fast…


 


Nowadays, if I could I would but I can’t, so I won’t,


But I still might, even though afterwards I sometimes pant,


What other addictions can I end with inner strength?


Certainly not caffeine, soda I find I cannot give up,


I have tried but damn it is harder than drugs or the drink,


I hate to whine but damn, Cherry coke just puts me over the brink…


        © ed ~ 3/29/05


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Reviewed by Lois Christensen 7/11/2008
I am getting hooked on diet cokes at bingo now. My hubby Tom drank them each day and I thought he was crazy for it cause I did not seem to like them so much. Took a small glass once in a while, but now at Bingo cannot get enough of it. It is addicting now.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 3/29/2005
Ed,

I can't give up my Diet Cokes. Or my smokes. Grrrrrrrrrrrrrr I turn into a real BEAR! without them.

Hope you find the strength--me, too--

Keep writing--now that's one addiction I don't mind LOL

((((((HUGS)))))) and love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/29/2005
So does Coffee for me....never will give that up!!

Love Tinka The Evil One ;(
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 3/29/2005
Often an addiction is prevented by something sweet.......much better then the orginal addiction :-)
Reviewed by Sue Hess 3/29/2005
steve and i have the same problem...the booze...i absolutely loved the stuff but its been 16 years and i sleep much better at night knowing i beat that one...but marshmallow peeps are my bete noir
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 3/29/2005
i prefer coke classic myself, but i do like a cherry coke once in a while..sorta' reminds me of doctor pepper. better that than booze, i always say, or drugs! LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Reviewed by Steve Patterson 3/29/2005
good write. well said.

booze i still like, if i could i would, but i can't, so i won't...least not today i hope). cigareets & caffine, still can't be beats, know what i means?

sex would be nice, at least once or twice. if i could i would, but she won't, so i don't.

TX
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 3/29/2005
I like cherries too in everything. I do drink maybe one soft drink a day and let that be that. But having low blood sugar I usually get my sugar fix. Getting out and walking helps a lot and does not affect the shoulder right now.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 3/29/2005
Must be all those cherries you're snorting, my good man..
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