The Vultures, the Lark
by Dawn Richerson
Tuesday, March 29, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Vultures circle overhead.
These hands tremble, jolted again by aftershock of your absence,
My wide eyes burned by beauty fierce of life’s last supper, feast of pain.
Dark road twists from green into green. Poisoned by the ache of empty, I fall fast to my knees and drink tears from the cup of my own hands.
A lone lark sings to me of spring. I dream of summer, yesteryear.
Awake again, I remember when truth caught in my throat tunneled straight through my heart and bore a hole through your eyes to infinity.
And the empty is all there is but love blooming in jasmine eyes – sacred symbol of hope restored, fragile, like Easter lily days.
So should my way be marked by thorns, I hold to single rose of trust. Would you accept it as the gift of grace it long has been to me?
Hands trembling, eyes brimming with pain, you are less alone than you think.
Walk with me in silence. There is no need for explanation now.
Vultures circle overhead.
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/30/2005 |
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| your imagery continues to impress ... never give vultures food for thought ... |
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| Reviewed by Henry Stevens |
3/30/2005 |
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| Image after image, yet movement. True art. Henry |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/30/2005 |
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O, Dawn,
Chilling imagery, powerful emotions--(((HUGS)))
One of your best. Exemplary!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :( |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/30/2005 |
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Great write Dawn!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
3/30/2005 |
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| Powerful indeed! Brava! |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
3/29/2005 |
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I loved the powerful imagery in this excellent poem, outstanding,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/29/2005 |
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Oh Dawn! Such incredibly beautiful imagery amidst the sorrow of it all! Can I hug you back;-)3 times;-)He will walk with you!...
Love,
Eileen |
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