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| Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) |
5/10/2005 |
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This is superb capturing every emotion felt. Takes me back, Its perfect.(c;)
Thanks Dale
Tracey |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
4/4/2005 |
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| Americana, pure, true and plaintive. This reminds me of my younger days in the 70's. Reads like the opening to a novel, and in truth would make a great story! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/2/2005 |
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| This reaches way down into the soul, Dale; and it makes one think. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
3/31/2005 |
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| Quite a profound slice of life piece, Dale. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/30/2005 |
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| the msterious mood of this poem leaves me yearning for more ... it seems to be searching for totality ... |
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| Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth |
3/30/2005 |
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| everybody just has to love Saturday after this. It has charm and class! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/30/2005 |
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Dale it is so true that those saturday nights turn to monday blues all too soon.You're delving into the why's and wherefores and it's aways full of mystery...excellent poem!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/30/2005 |
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Deep very deep Dale!!
Actually...this made me cry!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
3/30/2005 |
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| This is deep and soul-searching, Dale, and the unique style you adopt here is very fitting for the kind of "not quite sure what I'm lookin for" kinda questing that we do so much of at times in our lives. Your writes always remind me of the vast open spaces and are so full of a dusty kind of atmosphere that is very evocative. I am listening to the new queen of country rock as I read this: Gina Villalobos - and it fits perfectly - as it would have your other stunning write: "Open doors... shutters flying". I think you could easily write screenplay: you capture mood and place perfectly. Your writing seems so grounded and yet intriguingly enigmatic. You leave me always wanting to know more about the slices of life you depict. An interesting portrait of the less than satifying cycle of unfulfilled celebration and redemption. Excellent, thank you. Kate xx |
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