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|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|what a wistful poem about a love gone, no frills just the pain of remembering. you are a really good poet|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent poem ... blood is an symbol is just used also in my recent post ...|
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Plaintive write. "...And maybe if I would have had less history, we would have had more..." Its true that we put up barriers because we feel undeserving of love. But we have to change the movie in our head--find a way to wash the stain clean. This is something we can't do on our own. If you continue to carry the guilt, you will pass it onto your little girl. Peace...|