|Reviewed by George Jackson
|Fun to read=0). Great work, here.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Yet another great challenge entry, Sue - seems to be lots of challenges around these days.|
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*ģ
|An excellent read ... One of your best!
Love & Light,
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Sue, with the imagination you have..you could rule the world some day!
Nah....why would you want that headache? Just keep writing though..not only do you entertain but you inspire!
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|Excellent Sue...i think this could become a trend lol...nice one
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|Excellent response to the 100 word challenge Sue, had a great little turn in it at the end...enjoyed.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Brilliant response with a lovely twist at the end!!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent 100 word character study ...|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Sue you did this to perfection! Great work, love the end twist!
|Reviewed by Kenny Moon
|good flow and character study.|
|Reviewed by Henry Stevens
|I was really sold on this guy for you, what a harsh last line.....I'm sorry for you. Henry|
|Reviewed by Steve Patterson
but, can you rhyme " orange "?
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|You have an amazing talent. With such a grasp of the english lingo..
I'm decked again..
You should go on a word show. Here we have countdown.
Maybe you have something similar.
Don't go on weakest link though..lol
|Reviewed by Dave Harm
|Great write... with truths, that go both ways...|
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Great, Sue! This would make a good forward for a story...|
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|its not a true poem, just trying to make a sketch of someone within the 100 word limit. i realized long ago to keep away from men who belong to other women. they look good but if you can get them, you don't want to and if you can't...why suffer and hurt someone else trying.|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Interesting and you did well on this challenge.|
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|How heartbreaking sister Sue...I have had those longing myself, only to find he loved another. Oh well, such is life, I guess. Very good write, and I enjoyed every word of it. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy tot he world, peace on earth, & (((HUGS))), Barbie
"If I have to...Then I may as well be."