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| Reviewed by John Domino |
12/9/2008 |
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| An eye-popping write that awakens the need for change in the moral fiber of our families. We need to pray for souls such as this. Amen |
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| Reviewed by Denise Edwards |
4/7/2005 |
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| An experience many of us share, my friend. You expressed it eloquently and vividly. |
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| Reviewed by Patricia Gomes |
4/6/2005 |
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I hear the voice of Ai (one of my favorite poets) in your work, Nordette ... who could ask for more? Can't help but think the first two lines could just as easily read:
"I turn off desperate reports, anchors hawking
our misery measured by outraged poets." It works both ways, yes?
Love that your Den homepage takes me Anita Baker; my day is now complete.
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| Reviewed by D May (Reader) |
4/5/2005 |
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| This was felt. Hard hitting. Sorrowful write. |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
4/5/2005 |
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Nordette,
A deeply, soulful, exceptional poetic write!! Bravo!!
Blessings,
Robert |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
4/4/2005 |
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| Could feel your soul being flayed alive here, Nordette. Shock and horror is such a curious mix of a total emotional and psychological abuse and of numbing disbelief and anaesthesia. You graphically pen the effects of the former here. I can feel the intensity of your soul trembling... Bless you, Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
4/3/2005 |
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Right On (They're)Wailen Your Soul...
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/3/2005 |
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Nordette,
Shattering write--we feel your pain and wail with you. *tears*
So much sadness--
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *tears* |
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| Reviewed by Constance Gotsch |
4/3/2005 |
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| Some how appropriate to all the news about Pope John Paul. I am sure he would want less about himself and more about that kind of suffering. |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
4/3/2005 |
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| Oh God, horror of horrors! Missed the news. Massacre of the Innocents. No words. Strong write, wish I could reach out and give you a hug... |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
4/3/2005 |
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| And that man should be paid back or when convicted have the same thing done to him...if they send him to Trenton State Prison, the worst in the state, he will get his just dessert...sick is the world today...Find Peace, Ed & rufuz |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
4/3/2005 |
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A deeply felt and heart wrenching write Nordette, unfortunately there are no answers as to why? This makes my soul cry too.
Paul;-] |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
4/3/2005 |
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Yes it's a media gone mad but I guess we
should be aware of this crime. Crimes against
children get me the worst. Your last line there
says it all. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
4/3/2005 |
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I read this a 4 am. But waited for my blood to calm down.
You are so very right.
But after hearing about Americas Amber alert.
I thought blimey, what a great idea. And wrote to my MP.
Hard hitting. But the perpetrators should be
hit hard.. |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
4/3/2005 |
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Nordette, I do so agree with Eileen, Sherry and Michelle. Even tho this is a very superb write for you, I will never, ever, understand why this kind of crime still goes on. It breaks my heart whenever I hear that a child has been abducted, beaten, chained up like a four legged animal, sexually abused, or even mwentally abused. Abuse is abuse, no matter what the damn "anchors" say. And yes, what teh anchors call professionalism, I too, call it insensitive. There is not one good reason for a grown adult, to beat a child. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peac on earth, & ((((((((((((MANY SISTERLY HUGGGGGGGSSSSSS)))))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to...Then I may as well be." |
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| Reviewed by Ian Thorpe |
4/3/2005 |
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Good to see you showing us what a great writer you are Nordette...
love
Ian |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
4/3/2005 |
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Truly horrifying. The last four lines
are power-packed with emotion.
Love & Light,
Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
4/3/2005 |
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| Insensitive is what i see as I watch the "anchors" blabbling away about the most atrociou things that happen. They would call it "professionalism," I call it insensitive. |
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| Reviewed by Henry Stevens |
4/3/2005 |
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| A poem of shocking impact. Reality is too much to bear. Henry |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/3/2005 |
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Outstanding Nordette!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
4/3/2005 |
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a sad heartfelt write ...Nordette
William ......Peace & Love |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Close Mills |
4/2/2005 |
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| If I live to be 100, I'll never understand someone who can abuse a child this way. Those sorts of monsters should have been drowned at birth rather than been allowed to grow up and inflict such pain and suffering on the innocent. Nordette, I can feel every shattering emotion of this piece. Blessings to you, Michelle |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/2/2005 |
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| The more populated the world becomes, the more we will be made aware of this "in your face" reality. We cannot hide anymore. Not with all of the technological advances. We cannot pretend. A powerfully painful poetic offering, Nordette. Love and peace to you. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
4/2/2005 |
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If I live a thousand years, I will never understand this kind of crime. A baby with only trust and no defenses...no match for a grown man. How could he??!! When the Beast rises we must quiet it with understanding, introspection and patience, not feed it with violence. Excellent writing on a very sad subject.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/2/2005 |
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Nordette, I'm ready to make the world go away!
Superb write of an horrific event!
My fervent prayer is that we never become inured
to this as we have with so much other societal crime!
Eileen
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
4/2/2005 |
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| Touching Nordette. Teflon. Super reflecting piece. G |
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