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Taste
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Tuesday, April 05, 2005
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Taste



I feel them,
Deep and flavorful,
Words on my tongue,
I taste the color of your name...

Ah the sweet and tangy taste of some!
The bittersweet,
The burnt sugar of a few,
The aftertaste of the bitter-


I taste your name on my tongue,
Like fine smooth chocolate,
I savor the flavor,
And think of you...

I love walking in the deep woods,
The breeze blowing sweetly,
The fragrance of spring is in the air,
I whisper you name,
And feel you here.

My heart warms,
And my lips tingle,
The taste of your name,
Lingering there-

Out of the morning mist,
You come,
Did you hear me calling?
I am here love,

Waiting for you,
Feeling the taste of your name,
Savoring the sweet sound,
It makes on my tongue…


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Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 4/9/2005
Oh, Retta... this is a wondrous metaphorical celebration... such images and visuals. It tucks into the psyche and causes mind-smiles, indeed! I loved this line: "Feeling the taste of your name," and that metaphor woven throughout this very graceful piece. Great stuff! katy xox.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 4/8/2005
Love is all, Retta! How wonderfully you express it. I totally relate to the emotions and to the meaning expressed in this poetic offering. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy 4/7/2005
Raindeer, this is yummy!

Bobbi
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 4/7/2005
Oh, Reindeer, this is absolutely gorgeous
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci 4/7/2005
Hi Retta,

Very whimsical and loving!
Great pic. also!
Reviewed by Patricia Gomes 4/6/2005
oh, you romantic little lady, you! Adore your verse. Some may say you have an oral fixation ... let them. {wink} LOL!
Reviewed by Dawn Richerson 4/5/2005
a poem to savor here. funny, i read this just after tearing up some magazines (my new hobby... for collage) and I had the word "taste" right on top of my pile. Really wonderful.
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 4/5/2005
Softly sensous. Excellent. ~ Sara
Reviewed by D May (Reader) 4/5/2005
Wow! This is a real keeper. So beautiful. This is a wonderful write.
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 4/5/2005
Wow--Romantic You!

TRASK
Reviewed by Dale Clark 4/5/2005
Such a great verse style. I really
loved this Retta!
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 4/5/2005
Retta,

"I taste the color of your name" - what a fabulous line, as are all that have created a most stunning write ... perfection!!

Best to you,

Robert
Reviewed by L. Figgins 4/5/2005
Perfect write for initiation to spring and love's longing...
Reviewed by M. B. 4/5/2005
This is stunning, Reindeer! Beautiful writing, sensuous imagery!

~ Mari
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 4/5/2005
Stunning piece Retta!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Sue Hess 4/5/2005
you are romance personified, retta. this is excellent
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/5/2005
Reindeer, this leaves a sweet taste,lovely fragrance and beautiful warm thoughts in the mind. Wonderful poem!

Eileen
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 4/5/2005
Retta, You flavor our lives most sweetly everytime you offer us your words.
Wonderful write!

Lisa
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader) 4/5/2005
Excellent, I loved it

Regards
Sanilnath G
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 4/5/2005
Very passionate descriptive write! Love the romatic feeling to this one.
Reviewed by J. R. Corbin 4/5/2005
The things I miss most when I am away...the beauty of your words. Very sweet indeed.
Reviewed by John Bidwell 4/5/2005
Oh so precious all the way.
I am so happy to be able to say at least at this time...I can relate.
:)
John
Reviewed by Leysa Lowery 4/5/2005
"The taste of your name" -- such a sensual way of describing the feeling another evokes within a heart. Excellent.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 4/5/2005
A poem to be savored, Reindeer!
Reviewed by Carrie Deveney 4/5/2005
Good write..full of wonderful imagery! :)
-Carrie



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