|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|nOT A CLOUD IN THE SKY, BUT i LOVE TO LAY ON THE LAWN ON A HOT SUMMER'S DAY AND SEE THE CLOUDS. uNDERSTAND WHY YOU LEFT OUT THE CLOUDS THOUGH IN THIS PROFOUND WRITE. IT WAS BEAUTIFUL DAY FOR YOU. THOUGH I HOPE MANY DO'T LET TIME PASS THEM BY. GOOD READING LIKE YOURS IS TO BE HAD AT THEIR FINGERTIPS. LOVED THIS VERY TRUTHFUL AND ADVISIVE!!|
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|What a marvelous piece..saved this one..ty William
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|William, I'm glad I stopped by for this bit of wisdom. Well done!
|Reviewed by Denise Edwards
|William, this is full of wisdom, and it's very vivid in reality!|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|time and place; says it all. nice write, William.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|An interesting poetic slice of life - on any particular day on earth.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Can't argue with the words of this one. nice.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|True and insightful reality poem!!
Well written William!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|pleasant mind meanderings. on a beautiful day,William.
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|An excellent look at life, all that we never see...wonderful write
William, as always when you put pen to paper...
Love and peace friend, Carole
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I want to be the one that wins the lottery, just once is all I ask...just a few million...thanks...beyond that a beautiful poem, Bill, I swear you are improving by leaps and bounds...Ed|