|Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J
|Freedom is some times a bane as it is used for brainwashing into believing the false and adding confusion to the oen already confused. The God's speak from within us and yet we close our mind and open our ears which hears only the tongues of humans and not God's.
A wonderful and thoughtful write, Erin.
Love from India - Joel -
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|"Does the scent of freedomís wing
just beyond your golden ring,
Sing -- stop, and listen to your soul"
If they stop and listen to YOUR soul, they will learn a great deal as do I when I do read you, Mz Erin...Peace, Ed & rufuz
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|A thought provoking piece!!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|This is a good poem. It is a well thought out one. You put mankind on trial, more or less, and instead of condemning it, you give it a way out. I really got intoo this one.|
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|thought provoking read|
|Reviewed by Brian Pellerino
|Stop reading my mind.....
Unpopular to question these days...but so necessary for us to grow and evolve into beings of light.
Keep singing my mind,
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|outstanding thought provoking
William .....Peace & love
|Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|Powerful write Erin